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Reviews For A Time and Place to Grow
Absolutely brilliant! I loved the fluff between Snape and Harry. They do act a lot like family now, it's really funny! I like how Harry teases Snape and Snape lets him! Draco got spanked again! But he deserved it. Now I'm worried because the boys are getting into mischief and I"m sure Snape won't like it! I sense a double spanking coming on maybe? Fantastic job! And thanks for the quick update!
What are Draco and Harry planning? I feel kind of sorry for Snape....
Update soon!!
The two boys playing with fire reminds me of my own firebugs. The oldest two once set a roll of toilet paper on fire in the bathroom sink, and it's a wonder my youngest boy has lived to turn 14. Loved Harry's words to Snape, and I'm looking forward to the planned revenge. But I can't imagine that Snape doesn't expect Draco to plan something.
Love it! Tehe. I LOVED IT. "Without magic, just physical touch, you can learn to hurt someone or heal them." If I were Harry, I would have thought about the Death Eaters and shivered. I really liked how Harry talking and thought about family, women though. I wonder WHY Snape doesn't have a wife. What a cheeky Harry you have! He talks back like crazy and just barges into places. Wow, he's fun and very different. I'm really enjoying him. Draco's talk, well I'm glad that it was just talk. you have away to make us and Harry think one thing, but then have it turn completely around and we discover that it's a different situation. Very nicely done. "Still, we should be able to do something to the pieces. Like light them on fire." oh my. Just what are they thinking here? Haha. oh man. I didn't think that it would be fun at all, they way they spoke about it, but imagining the flaming ball of fire.. yeah i can see how it could be fun. XD I saw them getting into trouble though- Ha! And I think Snape has quite a bit in store now. I love a scheming Harry and Draco. How fun! I really, really appreciated this chapter. It was great! Thanks so much for sharing it and deciding to go ahead and write it.
Perry, I thought the subtle clues that not all was right with Harry were particularly clever. The whole shrinking of the nose was a riot. You did a great job keeping Draco in character by making him a self centered brat while at the same time giving an impression early on in this chapter that he didn't know exactly what he had done. His over the top reaction to being spanked was perfect! Later when he explains to Harry what all happened, we get the full impact not only of the danger Harry was in, but how horrible it was for Draco to see Harry in such a state and how much he regrets what he did. Malfoy is no sweetheart, but neither is he a monster like his father. The ending of this chapter was a true delight! I loved Harry's sense of humor and Snape's care of Harry were beautifully written. As always, this was fantastic and I avidly look forward to the next chapter! Tracy
Very nice chapter. So Harry didn't even notice that he was thinking of Snape as a father, eh? The banter at the end of the chapter was great, too. And it was SO Harry for him to feel obligated to point out that Draco was beaten by his father. I must admit that it's nice to see someone who recognizes that children know the difference between a spanking and a beating. One is done with love and in control, and the other is all about the parent's frustration and lack of control.
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