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Reviews For A Time and Place to Grow
This was a very great chapter. It was very clever how you let Harry watch without making it creepy that he was watching. Nice job. You also did a great job with explaining Draco's POV so we don't have to hate him. I feel a bit sorry for him, but also hope he does or says something stupid at supper so he can get it again before bed. With a ruler, or hairbrush maybe? Come on... fair is fair. Or maybe he could just relate to Harry about a previous spanking from Snape. Seemed like maybe Snape has paddled him before, both because Draco seemed to know what was coming and because Snape knew Draco didn't respond well to lecturing during a spanking as Harry seemed to. Nice job with this chapter, and indeed with the story. Thanks for indulging my spanking wish list.
I wonder if having Harry in the room would make Draco less forthcoming in his reasons and in talking to Snape about them and how he feels. I really liked SNape conversation to Harry about why he does what he does. it seemed very logical. I wonder about Harry... he seems rather out of it. “You do not try to harm other people in this house,” LOL that sounds like what I tell my little brother when he has a bear plushie eying a duck plushie, "We do not eat other members of the family." XD I think that Snape should spank Draco before bed anyway. He tried to kill Harry. But now we know that he hadn't meant to actually kill him. I'm glad, it doesn't seem so bad now, especially seeing Draco's outcome. I'm so glad that they called a truce though, but I want to see them get into trouble agian. Aw well, maybe they'll get into trouble together next time. I'm glad that Harry started bleeding- it made it seem more dramatic and up to par with what really happened to him. overall I think that you're doing a fantastic job with this story. I'm so happy that you posted, even though you had some difficulties. I'm sorry about that. :( I hope that we can solve them... just e-mail me.
Oh my gosh! LOL! Fantastic: "And the first thing he saw was the silver toothbrush floating in the toilet." Tehehe. This freaking rocks. "They had all been so peaceful and happy, going about the summer and doing their own thing, and then the drama queen arrived." Yeah, Potter you're one to talk. You're the one that blew up the lab- gah. Peaceful, indeed. :) I LOVED this part: “If you have something to say, then say it!” Draco snapped. “All right,” Harry stood up, realizing that he wasn’t going to get a moment’s peace until he said something, “you should try this book. It’s a pretty good read.” Muah ha ha!!! Best line ever. Good job Harry! You're getting a backbone of the right sort. I was a little surprised about what Draco said. It seemed like he was doing a good job hurting Harry with his words, giving as good as he (didn't) get, but Harry was able to just ignore him. I feel proud of Harry, but I'm also surprised. Could Snape be influencing him this much for the good? I have to agree with Snape, Draco should be kicked out. I wonder if the potions messed with Harry's brain, or maybe his reasoning skills. Or maybe this is the person he's turning into? In any case, it will be interesting to see the two boys interacting some more. If you ever need to post a chapter, just copy it and paste it in the box normally with a Ctrl+V. It should turn out alright. If it looks a little off and has too many spaces, or doesn't have indentations, that's okay. I wander around the latest chapters and edit them if they need to be, so it's no pressure on you. :) Just paste and as long as it's readble, don't worry about it. Harry heard he leave five minutes later, tossing the book on the table as he went. him.
Omg... I can't wait for the next chapter... Poor Draco, but Snape seems to care for Harry more than in any other chapter... Well I am rereading and waiting for the next chapter. Update soon!!!
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