| Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake
| 08 Nov 2006 8:40 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh, poor Harry! Poor, poor Harry! Poor Draco too. They really did it, bickered so much and finally someone got hurt. I guess we all saw it coming though. This was a really good chapter, I loved seeing how the boys did NOT get along, and all of Harry's thoughts. He's really insecure, isn't he? I hope that Snape isn't too mad at him, he must feel horrible.
I didn't notice any joint words but I did notice this:
Stoppering up the tub drain, Harry turned the water off. (You mean on?)
while Harry had to toil in the dirty like a dog. (Is this an expression or did you mean garden?)