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Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 08 Nov 2006 9:30 pm
Reviewer: Caite (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love how your chapters each leave me wanting just a little bit more!  Great work!
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 08 Nov 2006 5:54 pm
Reviewer: aslade (Anonymous) [Report This]

    It´s wonderful see that you have updated, very good chapter, but you are very cruel finishing  the chapter in this point, please update soon.

    Poor Harry is very hard Know you are the  responsable of the hurt of other person.

     

Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 08 Nov 2006 12:50 pm
Reviewer: Gillianne (Signed) [Report This]
    No...you can't stop there!  That's just cruel!  This is one of my very favourite Snape and Harry stories and I look forward to getting the e-mail saying it has been updated! :)
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 08 Nov 2006 11:17 am
Reviewer: apoorva (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolllluutely amzing ,did you know that yr the only one who actually updates yr story from time 2 time .
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 08 Nov 2006 10:19 am
Reviewer: Adams Sunshine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ooooh, Perry don't let Snape punish him for an accident! lol, I'm so loving this..
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 08 Nov 2006 8:40 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Oh, poor Harry! Poor, poor Harry! Poor Draco too. They really did it, bickered so much and finally someone got hurt. I guess we all saw it coming though. This was a really good chapter, I loved seeing how the boys did NOT get along, and all of Harry's thoughts. He's really insecure, isn't he? I hope that Snape isn't too mad at him, he must feel horrible.

    I didn't notice any joint words but I did notice this: 

    Stoppering up the tub drain, Harry turned the water off. (You mean on?)

    while Harry had to toil in the dirty like a dog. (Is this an expression or did you mean garden?)

Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 08 Nov 2006 7:52 am
Reviewer: cookie monster (Anonymous) [Report This]

    snape should be shot for giving away harrys bed and for blaming harry for dracos injury.

    liked the vulnerability that draco showed after harrys words

Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 08 Nov 2006 7:46 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Great chapter!! I loved your description of Harry's thought process when he is interacting with Snape and Draco. You are cruel to end the chapter the way that you did, so you need to update soon.

Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 06 Nov 2006 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Jen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OK, this is the second review (because I freakin' love this fic!!)- I just wanted to tell you again how awesome you are and beg for an update!!! I can't wait to see Snape really give it to Harry and Draco.  
Title: Chapter 21 - Enter Draco 31 Oct 2006 4:09 pm
Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, what a great chapter! Can we get an update as a Halloween present? Pretty please?

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