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Reviews For A Time and Place to Grow
Omg.... a cliffhanger!! Update asap!!!!
I wonder how the party is going to end, disaster or brilliant? And who's the first guest, maybe it's Draco coming at a very unappropriate time? Great chapter!
Aw, that's mean. It can't be a baddy, as the alarms didn't ring, but I can't wait to read a reaction of whoever enters first. Neville? Ron? Hermoine? Harry's best friend Seamus (dean must feel so left out now)... Or Dobby? Dobby with Winky, that'd be cool... Dobby with a huge box full of socks, none matching? Anyway, i love your story, and thought i should leave a message just for the sake of reviewing. I rate you a nine, since you are very close to perfection. Beyond the point of critisism, nearing the point of brilliance... almost there...
I didn't recognize any glaring errors, just a few that are mispelled. I also like seeing a bit of a carefree Harry. Not bad for a late nights work.
I think it was great!! still with the spanking but I suppose it has a point. Can't wait for the party... what if Snape invited other people? like MacGonagall? or The Dursleys!! haha... ok, maybe not. C
You're the best! An update! This was a marvelous chapter! I knew Snape would punish Harry for what he did. Poor Harry, always getting spanked, but I love it! Hope he had fun at his birthday, but knowing Harry, I'm sure something will go wrong. I like how Harry and Snape's relationship is growing. Great job!
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