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Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 31 Aug 2006 5:30 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    That was fun.  I think it was a good idea to point out that Harry is acting a little young for sixteen, but teenagers often do that.  One minute they're twenty, the next they're twelve.  And you continue to have a unique take on Harry and Snape's relationship. 
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 31 Aug 2006 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update! This chapter was very good. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 31 Aug 2006 4:55 pm
Reviewer: JadedColonel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Why did you stop?! Update as soon as possible.
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 31 Aug 2006 3:40 pm
Reviewer: youngwrider (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How cute was that?  I loved how normal this chapter was.  It was great that Snape just gave Harry a good spanking without all the drama and extra punishments.  The flying and swimming was a great touch.  And the party...I'm so excited.  Perhaps with Snape trusting and liking him more Harry will behave better. I'm very curious about how the party is going to turn out.  Nice job, and good chapter. 
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 31 Aug 2006 9:40 am
Reviewer: acacia59601 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape's fighting a loosing battle with Harry's hair, but I wish him the best of luck!
Title: Chapter 18 - Lucius Malfoy 29 Aug 2006 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Andy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That last chapter may have been short, but it was positively inspired.  I was in stitches over the last part.  It wasn't just the plot but the way you wrote it, with the pauses and then the crashing.  I haven't reviewed before, but let me also tell you that the rest of the story has been great too.  I especially love the dialogue.  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 18 - Lucius Malfoy 29 Aug 2006 8:51 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I wonder if Snape's home will still stand at the end of summer with Harry staying there?

    I hope Harry will try to amend his mistakes somehow and do something nice for Snape.

    Poor Snape having Draco and Harry over will not be easy.

     

    Please Update!

Title: Chapter 18 - Lucius Malfoy 29 Aug 2006 8:48 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Your humor is great:Well,"

    Harry said in a very small voice, "it’s just a few plates."

    Two seconds of silence, and then the mirror fell. It fell straight to the floor and flopped forward. Harry heard the glass of the mirror shatter underneath the frame.

    "And a mirror," Harry barely whispered.

    Five seconds of quiet. And the whole wall fell backwards."

Title: Chapter 18 - Lucius Malfoy 27 Aug 2006 6:56 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Gaaah you need to update right NOW!
Title: Chapter 18 - Lucius Malfoy 25 Aug 2006 10:16 pm
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally had a chance to read this story - I'm so glad I did. Good plotting so far, hope you continue soon.

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