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Reviews For A Time and Place to Grow
Great chapter again!Very generous of Snape to let Harry stay.
I like your story. I feel thar Snape may be a bit to hard on harry sometimes but it goes with the way you portray him. The spanking may be usefull for the story but are the use of object to do the spanking really necessary? I do have a sugestion; you should get somebody to read it after you write because in some places there are words missing (for example a be missing from a i'll be). They are pretty obvious to spot even for a francophone like me and they hurt the flow of the story since I have to stop to see what the word missing should be. With mistakes like these the person who wrote the text often doesn't not see them.
"Yeah," Harry felt a rush of bravery surge through him. "I still think you look like an overgrown bat. Really, why the dirty hair and black robes? It’s hot outside, and if you’re so keen on making me take a bath and wash my – ow!" HILARIOUS! Glad Harry got to stay and that Snape didn't give him the whipping he thought he deserved. I liked that Harry complained about being to old for such treatment, and Snape's explanation about why the spankings would continue and how Harry could get them to stop was reasonable. I'm guessing Harry will earn a few more trips over Snape's knee before he figures it all out. The Lucius deal is a nightmare, right? Harry wakes up all freaked and Snape comforts him? Nice update. And fast! I look forward to more.
you are the most evil person in the entire world! How could you leave off a chapter there? That is unfair and you know it. Please update soon! -aza-
Oh god! Great cliffhanger, entirely evil of you of course, but great nonetheless. I definitely can't wait for an upate, and wow I hope that Harry will be hidden from Harry. After all, it wouldn't do to have Lucius Malfoy see the boy-who-lived. I cannot wait for an update. An Amazing job as usual!
Great chapter. I like the way you've worked things out so far between Harry and Snape. From Snape's perspective, he can't trust Harry farther than he can see him. But on the other hand, Snape is gaining a greater sense of what Harry's going through internally. And I like the way Harry is seeing how his own actions have given Snape little alternative other than to keep him on a very short line and watch him like a hawk. But for all that, he's appreciating Snape more and more.
And now Malfoy! And Harry with no glamour and Snape's supposed to be a loyal DE. Looking forward to seeing what you do with that!
Uh-oh! This isn't going to end well. I wonder what he's doing there. Update soon. |
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