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Title: Chapter 17 - Starting Over 23 Jul 2006 7:57 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    Why do you have to leave us like that?? GRRrrr well hopefully you update soon. I really enjoyed the chapter. A super strict Snape is really funny. It's sad though, that he's threatening to give Harry back to his relatives if he does something wrong.
Title: Chapter 17 - Starting Over 23 Jul 2006 6:57 am
Reviewer: thee_unknown_factor (Anonymous) [Report This]
    O Crud!

    hhhehehehee, he is sooooo dead. unless snape does a wandless glamoure
Title: Chapter 17 - Starting Over 23 Jul 2006 5:12 am
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This chapter was great! You left us with a cliffy. This story keeps you interested, and I hope you keep it goin into Harry's school year. I love the fact that you are keeping the characters in character. Keep it up! Update soon.

Title: Chapter 17 - Starting Over 23 Jul 2006 3:08 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it, loved it, loved it. Poor Harry! I bet that the last part with Lucius showing up is a bad dream. I guess we'll see. :) Snape is so patient with Harry, I love how exasperated he gets though, thinking Harry a borrid little brat. XD Fantastic job with this story, I love the development and every chapter it seems. Thank you so much for writing and posting and being so regular! :)
Title: Chapter 17 - Starting Over 23 Jul 2006 2:36 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    omg! You did nto jsut leave us there? please please tell me I am dreaming and the rest is actually on the page.  I can't believe you do that. how rude!  hehehe.  Well very good chapter. I didn't find any main problems so don't worry about that.  waiting for more. :D 
Title: Chapter 17 - Starting Over 23 Jul 2006 1:29 am
Reviewer: DeepPoet117 (Signed) [Report This]

    Oh no! What's Lucius going to do? Did Narcissa tell him that Snape's nephew tried to steal something of theirs? I'm assuming that the memory charm only made her forget that she saw Harry Potter. I'm glad Snape's letting him stay. What about his birthday? Harry assumed that Snape wouldn't let him have his friends over, but Snape's not that cruel. Is he?

    If he doesn't let his friends over, then Harry will go mad with no human contact other than Snape. And if he does, then they'll probably get into some kind of trouble. Tough choice.

    Great chapter, as usual. Update soon!

Title: Chapter 17 - Starting Over 23 Jul 2006 12:41 am
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh No! That's the last person that Harry and Snape need to deal with.
Title: Chapter 17 - Starting Over 23 Jul 2006 12:38 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    You are evil. Leaving us with a cliffhanger again!

    Why did Malfoy come over?Did Narcissa remember who her house guest was? Well wil Snape be exposed as spy or will he be ableto somehow save the situation? As you mentioned adoption in the summary I guess he is going to be exposed, that would clear the way for adoption.

    Anyway I like the way you keep Snape strict and stern. Lööking forward to more! Please update soon!

    Well one question. Why is it so ridicously easy to enter the manors? One would think Malfoy as well as Snape would have some protection against unwanted visitors.

Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 20 Jul 2006 11:03 pm
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was incredibly...realistic.  I can't think of any other way to describe it. thanks, and I'll be waiting for the next update.
Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 20 Jul 2006 11:03 pm
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was incredibly...realistic.  I can't think of any other way to describe it. thanks, and I'll be waiting for the next update.

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