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Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 26 May 2006 3:41 am
Reviewer: WolfDragonDemon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope you continue, Harry's gonna get in trouble!
Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 25 May 2006 3:01 am
Reviewer: spuddy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    oh no!!! someones in troubble now =) i wonder what punishment harry will get this time?

     i realy like where this story is going i find myself contantly looking to see if there are any new updates =)

    keep up the good work

    Spuddy 

Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 23 May 2006 11:13 pm
Reviewer: AlyssaEde (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Looks like Harry is in some deep trouble. This was a great chapter.  Update soon I dying to know what happens next.

Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 23 May 2006 8:38 pm
Reviewer: Cho-sa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh harry, when will you learn? 
Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 22 May 2006 5:01 pm
Reviewer: miracle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i love this story,please keep going.cant wait to know what happens next
Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 22 May 2006 10:22 am
Reviewer: anonomous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    totally brilliant!!!!!! ooooooooo harry's going to get spanked!! upd8 on fanfiction.net!!!!! and upd8 soon!! need the next chapter:p
Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 22 May 2006 8:04 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Oh my. oh my oh my. :) Wonderful chapter! It may be filler, but it was good and very interesting filler, and making me want more. More! Oh man, Harry's really into it now. I love how he got Dobby to come over and he tried to hide him and get information out of him. i like how he didn't really succeed, that made it seem much more real. But now he's cuaght! Oh no.

    I really liked how Harry is listing all his "sins". I just know that Snape is going to find out about at least some of them. Great chapter. I'm stuck in extreme anticipation to read more! you better update soon! I have to go back and review the last two chapters too. i read them while I was rushing at work and didn't have time to properly review them.

    Great, great, great chapter. PLEASE update soon! :)

Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 22 May 2006 3:27 am
Reviewer: MinervaGranger (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh HECK. Watch Harry talk his way out of THIS one. Good luck to him. Please don't make me wait, I need to know what happens.
Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 21 May 2006 8:42 pm
Reviewer: youngwrider (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope Harry confesses everything and gets a chance to talk everything over with Snape.  After the spanking of course. Snape could actually spank the confession out of him.  I actually don't like the comfort scenes that show up in Painful Gaurdianship after spankings, but I could see it working well with this particular situation you have set up.  Harry breaks down while Snape is spanking him, then later while disscussing the Sirus situation Snape could offer a bit of comfort.  Not too much mind you.  This is Snape we are talking about.  I really hope Snape doesn't take his Birthday party away.  Update as soon as you can. I'm dying to see this pants down paddling.  I reread that line several times thinking "Oh, my!" Don't put your chapters down; this one was good, just like the others.
Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 21 May 2006 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Molly Morrison (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh dear.. I foresee much pain in Harry's future.  I almost feel bad for Snape, because Harry just does not seem to be getting the point, here. ;-)

    Is it because Snape is from school, that Harry hasn't figured out how to treat him like the Dursleys and essentially keep his head down?  Or is it that Snape won't do any permanent damage, whereas there was no such promise with the Dursleys?  Or is he just going through a late rebellion stage?

    Looking forward to the next chapter, when it's ready! :-) 


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