Huzzah! Nicely done - I like it. Very nice.
| Title: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey
| 05 Oct 2009 12:52 am
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| Reviewer: CF (Anonymous)
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Not sure what this means?-
"As your guardian, I got the bank to sent me some money to pay for your school things, including books and clothes. All right, you stay here while I go to the Ministry for awhile.”
Is it that Snape asked Gringotts to release some of Harry's money to him so that he could use it to buy Harry's stuff, or that Snape got the bank to send some of his own money to him to buy Harry's stuff. The first doesn't sound very 'parental' and makes Snape look tightfisted. I think you probably meant the latter.
Anyway doesn't matter, the little goodbye scene between Harry and Snape is and will remain, one of my favourite scenes in all of HP fictiondom.
Of to read the sequel now. WOoooo.
CF
| Title: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey
| 29 Sep 2009 11:01 pm
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| Reviewer: reba (Anonymous)
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I have to write a review to rate the story. How silly. I do rate with a 10. Everything said.
i just cant get over how good this story is i keep rereading it i just love it!
XSGX
| Title: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey
| 25 Aug 2008 6:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Kohee (Anonymous)
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This was perhaps the best HP fanfic i have ever read and I have read a lot. I'm tempted to go back to the beginning and start over again, but first the second installment. Which you must be sure to update. Oh this was great! Loved it. Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing it. Your characters, their interactions, and over all pace of the story was to say the least brilliant. Having read this all in one sitting my mouth hurts from laughing so much. Not only that but I choked on my coffee twice. Ok, I will force myself to stop now. Oh hell, thank you again for this amazing story. You made my day and for all of us readers in need of a good read (hehe) NEVER stop writing. It would be too big of a loss.
WOW! AMAZING! I have completely and totally loved this story! You fleshed out Snape into such a great 3D character, even the Manor itself felt like a well defined character! I can't wait to see how Draco and Harry handle things when they're back at school! And Harry is really starting to mature into a great young man! I can't wait to see how classes go and everything else! yay!
Small error in the 10th paragraph from bottom, 4th sentence. I believe the word you wanted was "fantasized" (root word "fantasy"), not "fanaticized" (root word "fanatic").
Aha! A fellow Alan Rickman lover! I enjoyed "if you were a Muggle, you could be on the stage with that kind of acting. Live in London, have adoring fans, always play the villain."
Aren't there some ADHD drugs in the wizarding world they could give Harry for his abysmal impulse control?
Best chapter so far! Maybe even the best chapter of all. (But in fairness, I don't know what's coming yet.)
I love a good, well-written angsty chapter! Thank you.
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