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Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 20 May 2006 5:16 pm
Reviewer: Emilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Uh oh! Boy, Harry´s going to be spanked so hard he won´t be able to sit for days.
    As always, great chapter. I like that Harry is starting to feel safe around Snape and that he feels bad about lying. They´re definitely making progress.
    I don´t think your chapter is bad, actually.Your filler is really funny. There are a number of typos, you might want to correct them.Looking forward to the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 20 May 2006 4:10 pm
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well technically Harry didn't lie to Snape, but some how I doubt he'll see things that way. Please don't take so long to update again.
Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 20 May 2006 8:58 am
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    In the doorway stood a very cross-looking, very displeased, very stern Snape looking straight at Harry and Dobby.

    ooooooh*shivers*

     And:

     "Oh, and Potter," Snape turned back, his hand on the door handle, "if I find that you’ve been lying to me after I gave you four chances to tell the truth, I will take your trousers down and tan your hide with my ruler until you can’t sit down for two days. Good night."

     Another very good line:P

     I don't think this chapter was bad! I think Snape was brilliant and Harry starting o get guilty about the things he has done. Wonder if he's gonna confess to Snape?

     Great chapter, but I want to know what's gonna happen to Harry, so hurry up with the next chapter! :D

Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 20 May 2006 8:44 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Harry will be in so much trouble. As you let Harry think about all his other lies , is Snape going to find out?

    It would be great if a concerned Dobby lets it slip that Harry is a just a bit too interested in Malfoy Manor. Well if Harry is going on like this he won't be able to sit down for the rest of summer. Will he be back on being treated like a little kid, staying with Snape 24/7?

     

    Please update soon! Are you always going to update every 2 weeks from now on instead of every week?

     

Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 20 May 2006 8:25 am
Reviewer: Butterbutt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Squeee! Oh no, Harry's in SO much trouble. I was sad to hear that the charmed car had been returned because it would have been AWESOME if Harry stole it.
Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 20 May 2006 8:24 am
Reviewer: veritas (Anonymous) [Report This]
    First two words that came out of my mouth..."holy shit!" uh oh...looks like Harry's in trouble....again...As Filch put it...Oh dear, we are in trouble. Poor Harry. lol Can't wait for another exciting chapter. Please update soon!!!!!!
Title: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby 20 May 2006 8:00 am
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    two words. oh shit. that's not good. well, now it's more than 2 words, but still...despite your dislike of this chapter, i enjoyed it. update soon!
Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 19 May 2006 6:51 am
Reviewer: snape-nirdosh-hai (Anonymous) [Report This]

     OK ENOUGH DELAY ALREADY! I hav been glued to the computer for the past FOUR DAYS waiting for your update. I am very close to being transferred to st. mungos mental ward.   UPDATE PLEASE!  PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

     

Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 19 May 2006 1:46 am
Reviewer: you know who (Anonymous) [Report This]

    :(( :(( :(( crying.........

    *sniffs and sobs..*

    are u going to update or not???? now i'm really gettin' angry!

    please i'm on my knees....

    update!NOW! 

Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 18 May 2006 8:23 pm
Reviewer: aslade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please, please, please! update I can´t take it any more I´m going crazy. I love your storie.

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