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Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 05 May 2006 1:18 am
Reviewer: Kirsty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooo dobby is here!!! Thank god he got the message!! Cant wait for next chapter, you did this one well!! :)
Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 04 May 2006 9:23 pm
Reviewer: thee_unknown_factor (Anonymous) [Report This]
    sneaky little half slytherein!

    I wonder if snape has any wards to tell him about foreign house elves invading his property/.


    heheh
Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 04 May 2006 1:17 pm
Reviewer: miracle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    one of the best stories i ever read .please keep going!!!!!
Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 04 May 2006 5:01 am
Reviewer: MinervaGranger (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow. So, what happens with Dobby? This is becoming a really fascinating story, congratulations.
Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 03 May 2006 11:15 pm
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]

    wOOt! Dobby's here! I love Dobby, he's the coolest. I liked this chapter, especially the line

    “Your hair’s just like you,” Snape growled, highly displeased.

    “My hair is me,” Harry argued. “But if it makes you happy, I’ll try and think obedient thoughts to see if that helps.”

    Quite possibly one of the funniest lines I have ever read. Update soon!

Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 03 May 2006 10:30 pm
Reviewer: JadedColonel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I wonder what Dobby is doing there so quickly.

    Update soon.

Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 03 May 2006 10:22 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Anonymous) [Report This]

    “I have to take vitamin potions and eat greens?” Harry stabbed a long green viciously. “You make me eat everything I hate.”

    “Yes, Potter, how else could I ever amuse myself?

    I found this little exchange particularly amusing.  Snape is loosening up and I'm looking forward to the birthday party.

Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 03 May 2006 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Emilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh boy! Harry is so going to do something stupid. Poor Snape, he must want to bang his head all the time Harry´s around.
    Interesting bit about Alice Longbottom.
    I guess I´m repeating myself, but your story is very captivating and quite hilarious. Keep up the good work!
Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 03 May 2006 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I love the hair scene.
    Harry's going to Malfoy manner!
    Does the Order know where harry is or do they still think that Harry is still at Private Drive? Since his letters are being directed to him.
    Love your story!!! Though I've said it before its true.
    Keep it up!

Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 03 May 2006 9:18 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I'm just going to say one word. It's a bit boring now to say how good the chapter is:P I have done that so many times!

     Yay!

     But no soap in Harrys mouth? I'm disappointed:P



    Author's Response: Sorry, I'm sure I'll have that punishment later, but I'm trying to space them out so I don't get criticized for writing a punishment fest which this is clearly not meant to be. 

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