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Title: Chapter 11 - Weeding through the Past 22 Apr 2006 5:17 pm
Reviewer: JadedColonel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Great update.

    I like how you keep both of them in character. I really like how Snape already knew Harry was about to start a fight and sent him in the corner.

    UPDATE SOON!

Title: Chapter 11 - Weeding through the Past 22 Apr 2006 6:59 am
Reviewer: Tsukinoko (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved the bit of Harry's thoughts while he was standing in the corner.  Those are just the type of irrational thoughts that I get when I'm irritated! 
Title: Chapter 11 - Weeding through the Past 22 Apr 2006 3:18 am
Reviewer: Amaruk Wolfheart (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I totally love this chapter! ^^ Harry's thoughts on Snape - especially the house with round rooms - always crack me up. You're keeping both of them in character and creating an aesome story. I love it!!!
Title: Chapter 11 - Weeding through the Past 22 Apr 2006 3:12 am
Reviewer: mariya (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I love this your story!!!!

    During the night when Harry felt that comforting hand... Was that severus?

    Please update soon!!!

    I can't wait!!!

Title: Chapter 1 - Floo Me Away 22 Apr 2006 2:01 am
Reviewer: jucajo (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Thanks for the update, I found it hilarious when Snape sent Harry to the corner before he even say a word, and also Harry's thoughts about building round rooms... accurate teen rumbling.

    I didn´t like too much Snape's reaction to Harry's childhood stories though. I expect him to be cold and not coddle the kid or turn all fluffy, but he was a little intransigent, even in front of plain facts. Don't get me wrong, I love your story and your characterization, but I think that scene would have been much better is Snape could at least accept that he's been wrong in some of his assumptions.

    Anyway, keep writing! Your story is one of my favorites. 

Title: Chapter 11 - Weeding through the Past 22 Apr 2006 12:00 am
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *sigh* It's getting hard to read this story. Harry's going to do something stupid. I just know he is. I liked this chapter. It was interesting how Harry thought that Snape giving him everything he needed would be the worst sort of parent. I bet thst if Harry acted like he did around Snape, Mrs. Weasley wouldn't wait a moment to start yelling or have Arthur or even herself take him out for a trip to the broomshed. Great chapter. I can't wait for the next installment. UPDATE SOON!!!
Title: Chapter 11 - Weeding through the Past 21 Apr 2006 11:53 pm
Reviewer: felinedreams (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update! And I can't wait  for the next installment! I admire the way you describe Harry's emotions and thoughts regarding Snape. Snape's cool, too. I'd love to see their relationship evolve further. And could you, please, make Harry evince more positive emotions regarding Sev. Harry's mostly mad with him, or resigned. I like these emotional fluctuations, but it would be really nice if Harry sometimes had the upper hand in their arguments! (and would feel smug about that afterwards) :))) UPDATE!!

    Author's Response:

    Ok, I know everyone wants to see them grow closer together, and eventually I plan to have Harry and Snape . . . well, I don't want to give anything away just yet. Because you all cheered for more chapters, I'm going to stretch this out as long as I can, and that means lengthening the relationship between our two protagonists.

    And if you've read the whole story, you'll notice they are closer than they were at beginning. They're both more honest and open with each other. Later I plan to have Snape tell Harry about his own childhood, and then things may become clearer.

    But thanks for reviewing. I appreciate everyone's comments.

    Hugs and kisses!

Title: Chapter 11 - Weeding through the Past 21 Apr 2006 11:46 pm
Reviewer: you know who (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wowww you updated you really made me happy!i've just managed to wake up (it's past midnight)to finish my essay for tomorrow.(havn't statarted it yet!)

    i was in adepressed mood untill i saw you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

    did i review for the perviouse chapter??if NOt!sorry i'm happy you decided to make this story longer.STANDS UP AND CHEERS!!!!!!!!!!

    i havn't read this chapter yet.(reviewing before reading the chapter he he!!)

    this story is GREAT!

Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 21 Apr 2006 1:17 am
Reviewer: Dina (Anonymous) [Report This]

    WOW! Woowwww!

    I am just SO jealous because your story is much better than mine, snifff. LOL

    Your story is just amazsing.  It gave both Harry and Sev enough time to grow closer and they are both very much in haracter too.  I wanted to read teh story for a long time now but was very busy to do so.  I just read it all today in one sitting, thanks to the Easter holidays.  I just love it.  I promise I will review each chapter seperately later.

    And umm ... I know I am the last one to talk about it, but please update?

     

     



    Author's Response: Oh, no, your story's great. I look forward to every update. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 19 Apr 2006 7:04 pm
Reviewer: JadedColonel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Cool story.

    Hope you update soon.


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