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Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 19 Apr 2006 3:03 am
Reviewer: Noone (Anonymous) [Report This]

    *Stands up and cheers!*

    Woohoo!!

    Luved it!

Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 15 Apr 2006 7:16 pm
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no, no, no. I don't mean that Draco and Harry should become friends. That would be totally OOC. Too much water under that bridge etc. But it would be nice if Harry found out that Draco *didn't* get away with misbehaviour as much as he thought. BookHarry is always fuming about how Draco 'gets away with things' (he notoriously throws things in other people's cauldrons etc and Snape 'doesn't see it' and subtracts points from the Gryffindor whose potion had been ruined) while in fact it is more often than not *Harry* who gets away with things. Harry has great difficulty in seperating reality from appearance (possibly something he learned from the Dursleys, THE most obsessed-with-appearance family of childrens literature) Yes, it would be nice if he found out that Snape *doesn't* let his snakes get away with things. Harry could only grow from such a realisation...
Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 14 Apr 2006 4:36 pm
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh, I forgot: of course I stand and cheer and hope you'll write at least another thirty chapters before wrapping up this story. It's the best!

    One more thing... I just read some of my fellow reviewers reviews and I am so glad you answered to the last one that you wouldn't make Snape all fluffy, even if he found out that the Dursleys were so very nasty. The whole sleeping in a cupboard thing doesn't really matter. I shared ar room of six feet by eight feet with two elder sisters - only possible with the aid of a collapsable bed and a bunk bed - for thirteen years. Nor are the chorer. It's the constant reminding of how unwanted Harry was and how utterly loved Dudley that's so damaging. Yet Harry doesn't appear to be damaged much. After a mere two days of being hailed as the saviour of the wizarding world he dares to cheekily backtalk to a teacher in a way he would never have dared to do against his uncle Vernon. Can you imagine Harry (pre Hogwarts) telling Vernon Dursley "Why don't you ask Dudley, he seems to know", the way Harry did in his first Potions lesson? And is Harry spoiled in the wizarding world? YES, he is. No matter that the Dursleys treat him like crap, Harry Potter is SPOILED beyond belief in the world that really matters to him as to Snape. Within a week his teacher breaks the schoolrules just for him and buys him a broom - which poor Ron could only dream about - so he can compete as a first year in Quidditch. Dumbledore lets him have a invisibility cloak - a piece of contraband if ever I saw one. And I could go on and on. But the worst is the mounting rudeness Harry displays towards Snape. 

    So Snape is NOT wrong in thinking Harry is spoiled. I so hate, hate, HATE fics where Snape visits the Dursleys, finds Harry in coma (with broken bones, no less. As if Harry, after finding himself magical, would ever let himself be beaten like that. This is the Harry that blew up aunt Marge and protected Dudley from a dementor. And as if the Dursleys would ever do something so gauche as beating up Harry. They are both too subtle as too middleclass and unimaginable for that), and suddenly Snape does a "boohoo, I've been so nasty to poor widdle Harry, I'll adopt him, kiss him on his widdle head and let him do what he wants because his life has been so bad!". I sooo hate that! As if Snape's life was any better! (it was worse) As if not half of Hogwarts pupils have problems (Neville was thrown out of a window to see if he was a squib or if he would bounce like a wizard. Rather like old witchtrails reversed: if she was a witch she would float and you could burn her. If she would drown she was innocent and in heaven) As if having a less than pleasant childhood is an excuse to misbehave.  So please please please don't make that an issue!

    Oh, and one last thing: Draco. I've always got the niggling suspicion that Snape might publicly favour his Slytherins and not detract points from them, but that he would discipline them for misbehaviour where no Gryffindor could gloat over them. I mean, he is obviously respected by his Snakes. They certainly don't walk all over him. There must be consequenses to their actions, even if he pretends not to notice when they misbehave in a classroom full of Gryffindors. I bet Draco has found out how hard his Head of House's hand is by now, too... :-)



    Author's Response:

    Thank you once again for the very insighful, very indepth review. I agree with you a hundred and ten percent that Harry is somewhat spoiled by the wizarding world. As for Draco, eventually he may meet up with Harry and I may have Draco admit how hard Snape is on his own house in prvate, but I don't think I will have them become friends. Harry hates Draco, and vice versa, and no adoption from Snape will change that.

    Thanks again for the great review!

Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 13 Apr 2006 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, and I came up with another question, will Snape ever get to know about Harrys childhood, how Dursleys treated him etc? 

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I sruggled with this problem. On the one hand, Harry had a hard time of it (really, who wants to be locked in a closet for eleven years?), and Sanpe should be sympathic towards that though he probably won't let that be Harry's excuse for misbehaving. On the other hand, the books indicate that Snape didn't have that easy a childhood before he came to Hogwarts and certainly not while he was there.

    So to answer your question - i have no idea. I'll just have to wait andf see if I can deal with that issue when the right time comes. My Snape will not be fluffy and overly caring - I like him strict and stern, taking no nonsense because that is just what Potter needs!

    Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 13 Apr 2006 6:12 pm
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]

    well, that's funny. harry says he doesn't plot, the little liar. ha ha. he's got the whole thing planned out in his head. oh boy. Malfoy Manor's right next door. oh lord.

     

Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 13 Apr 2006 11:29 am
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Great chapter!

     "The man behind the corner turned his ugly eyes on Harry. "I see," the man croaked. "I do hope Nephew Henry got his just rewards from his dear uncle for such naughtiness."

     I loved that one:P

     And please don't make Harry and Draco friends? I dislike stories when they are like best mates. I mean, they have hated each other since they started Hogwarts, why would they stop now?

     And as usual, I'm saying, hurry up with the next chapter!

Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 12 Apr 2006 2:59 pm
Reviewer: emilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Standing and cheering *lol*
    Your story is awesome, I love the way it´s going so please continue.
    Poor Snape, he´s just not getting through to Harry.
    Please don´t make Harry and Draco best friends. Pretty please with a cherry on top. . .
Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 12 Apr 2006 12:37 am
Reviewer: Amaruk Wolfheart (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *immediately stands up and cheers* Hoorah! I love lengthy stories! ^^ I cracked up at the end of the last chapter, and thoroughly enjoyed this one. Keep 'em coming! This fic is too much fun!
Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 12 Apr 2006 12:04 am
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story!! I love how your going to keep going with the story. I really hope that it keeps going untill after he finishes a year of school. But its your story so what ever you think is best. Love your story!!!! Update real soon!
Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 11 Apr 2006 11:17 pm
Reviewer: belle (Anonymous) [Report This]

    (Standing and cheering) More chapters!!! Yay!!!

    Love your story, and hope we get lots of it (keep this going through school year please, I'm really looking forward to see the interaction between Snape and Harry in Hogwarts after this summer together). Don't bring Sirius back! That's so wrong... I'm sure you'll make Snape explain to Harry the dangers of playing with time (after some good smacks I hope), this is one of his stupidest ideas!


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