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Title: Chapter 3 - Getting Warmer 13 Feb 2006 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really like your story and I like it even more that you update so fast! Snape treats Harry like a little kid and Harry doesn't like it. I wonder how he will get back at Snape for that . There is bound to be some trouble.
Title: Chapter 3 - Getting Warmer 13 Feb 2006 9:21 pm
Reviewer: ANN (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GOOD CHAPTER.  I LOVE THE CHECK UPDATES.  HARRY SEEMS UPSET, SICKNESS OR GUILT.
Title: Chapter 3 - Getting Warmer 13 Feb 2006 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Signed) [Report This]

    I'm really liking this fiction!  Please update soon!

     

    Saph Starlet 

Title: Chapter 3 - Getting Warmer 13 Feb 2006 8:41 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    OOh, I can't wait for the next chapter! Please tell me that Harry is going to get a spanking!

Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 13 Feb 2006 4:40 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an excellent story!  I love it!  I like Snape and Harry stories, especially the ones where they don't get along.  Spanking is no problem for me.  Who better to do it than Snape?  Harry needs a little tough love now and then.  Please, keep up the great work!
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 12 Feb 2006 6:37 pm
Reviewer: greeneyes (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a wonderful story.  I especially like your take on a reluctantly caring Snape.  Is he going to find out about the Dursleys?  They don't seem as bad here as in other stories, but locking a child in a cupboard and starving him for years is abuse no matter how you cut it.  Thank you, and please continue!
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 10 Feb 2006 7:30 pm
Reviewer: Mairead (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this story; it has a unique flavour that combines familiar and comforting ideas with new and original themes. I look forward to seeing its continuation
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 09 Feb 2006 5:39 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it! Great! The bath morning wash spell was great! The haircut and then th elotion and powder- A spell for mothers with too many children? HAHA! LOL poor Harry! Awesome chapter. You have a great Snape! I am also enjoying your Harry a lot. The time turner story just thickens the plot- Yay a plot! Great story so far! :D
Title: Chapter 1 - Floo Me Away 09 Feb 2006 3:50 am
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh. Forgot one tiny. Thing. One of the reviewers (I just read all the reviews) asked "why did Harry get porridge?". This amazed me. My mother always said "children need porridge to grow on". Did I read this correctly? Does Snape Harry porridge because that is what children get? The wizarding world always did sound rather Victorian to me, and whilst adult Victorians ate kippers and muffins for breakfast, they gave their children porridge and milk. It just sounded logical to me. But now I'm starting to doubt. Please tell me Snape didn't do that just out of spite (no matter how well-deserved)! But no. I trust you. Your characterisation of Harry and Snape has been spot-on so far, I should have faith. Faith I've got, but no patience!! Heh.

    Author's Response: Just wait - I don't put anything in a story without having a good reason. Thank you for all you helpful tints and insight.
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 09 Feb 2006 3:34 am
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]

    After a second reading of the second chapter some more observations:

    I love Snape's reaction to Harry's 'the bathbrush hit me'. "How unusual" indeed. Snarf, snarf.

    The whole breakfast thing (and bath and checking for a fever thing etc) breaks me up. Harry wants to be treated like or at least equal to an adult. He adresses Snape as 'Snape' instead of 'Professor' or 'Sir', he thinks his breakfast is inferior ('for a baby') even though it is delicious and superior to anything he would get at the Dursleys and he insists on getting all the information and having a say in matters. And Snape constantly reminds him to the fact, in word and deed, that Harry is a teenager and not an adult. This is better than Shakespear! Instead of 'The Taming of the Shrew' we get 'The Taming of the Tantrum-happy Teenager'. *snicker*

    Oh, and I love the way how, for all Harry's complains, whinings and misgivings, Snape in fact treats him quite well. Snape has NOT bruised him, does NOT lock him up, does NOT give him inferior food and is in fact very reasonable and hospitable. He just demands the consideration and respect a fifteenyearold should show his teacher and elder. And Harry, having been spoiled to bits by Dumbledore, McGonagal, Lupin and Sirius and having learned to dismiss the Dursleys as inconsequential, is not ready to accomodate. Ohhh, there's going to be some fireworks at Snapdragon Manor!! ;-)


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