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Title: Neighborhood Block Party 28 Nov 2009 11:46 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter, I think I wanna go to a block party too lol, they sound fun, poor Harry with the sting though, those things hurt like heck! :D

    Author's Response: Aw yeah. but Harry has Snape to make it all better! :) Thanks for your comments!
Title: Neighborhood Block Party 28 Nov 2009 10:49 am
Reviewer: xam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally an update! This is one of my all time favorite stories and it's hard waiting for new chapters.
    I love the 'almost hug' that Snape gives to Harry (and carrying him to the car...trust Snape to make it all better!
    So what's up with the family meeting?
    I can't wait to read more, I hope all is well with you and RL, and that you are able to update soon.
    Happy Holidays!
    :D

    Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! You will have to find out about the Family meeting next time. It's not something I planned so we'll have to see where the characters take me. :)  Hopefully I will be able to update again before Christmas.
Title: Bubble and Squeak 10 Nov 2009 7:41 am
Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have just come across your magnificent story. I can't tell you how much I love it! You are one of the few writers who capture Snape and Harry's relationship to the T, and Hoppity what a charming character. You are very talented.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) It is great to hear such things. I hope that you enjoy the next part of the installment.
Title: The Tantrum 01 Nov 2009 4:47 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    I think it's fantastic you included your comments on corporal punishment at the end of this one - and that this chapter didnt have any in it, not because I'm anti- or pro-spanking but because it wouldnt endear harry to snape any and i doubt hoppity would be capable of it ^^ - personally I agree as well, it's a bit too 'do as I say not as I do' which is a ridiculous way to teach creatures who intrinsically learn by example, but I'll shut up (you must be getting so sick of me commenting on everything, sorry ^^)

    I love your slow progression of snape and harry's relationship and the fact that they both seem to have a commentary on their changing characters, it makes it much more realistic than the fics where they dont notice their own softening or whatever (Im not entirely sure that made sense... hopefully you know what i mean ^^)

    One more chapter then I'll be waiting like everyone else, I'll say now that I cant wait 'til you update again but in the meantime I'm sure I'll reread this plenty, it's a truly wonderful fic ^-^
    have fun x

    Author's Response:

    Oh I know what you mean. :) I believe that seeing the character growth and closeness from the character's perspective is important to truly believing the growth of the relationship. :)

    Thank you for your comments on the cp note. I also believe that it would not help Snape and Harry grow closer. Not in this story.

    Thank you for all of your comments, I truly enjoy reading them and hope that you will post many more! :)

Title: Bubble and Squeak 01 Nov 2009 4:47 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, leaving us on a bit of a cliffy, cannot wait to read more (but dutifully will ^^) *gives you lots of blueberry muffins for the awesome time I've had reading this fic so far* thanks!
    Have fun and stay safe ^^ x

    Author's Response: Thanks for the muffins and for your review. :) Hope you enjoy the next part.
Title: Bubble and Squeak 30 Oct 2009 4:32 pm
Reviewer: Ciara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    UPDATE!!!!
    (please)

    Author's Response: Sorry, I will when I can! thank you for being so patient. :)
Title: Velveteen Rabbit (Sick Harry) 29 Oct 2009 2:21 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the link, I havent read the story in years and it's so precious ^^ And I absolutely love Snape's TLC (who wouldnt love it? ^^) this just gets cuter and cuter ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you! :) I love that you are enjoying the story. Thank you for your comments!
Title: Secret Accident 29 Oct 2009 2:21 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Despite the completely gorgeous fluffiness of all the previous chapters this has to be the cutest ^-^

    Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm glad you approve.
Title: Settling In 28 Oct 2009 12:04 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    I couldnt not tell you how brilliant a writer you continue to be when you made me laugh so much with this:
    the old coot would be less likely to bother him on a whim as the headmaster was wont to skip gaily along the halls the week before the students arrived, casting learning enchantments everywhere.
    Fantastic image ^^
    and Martha Jones with an American accent... interesting ^^
    brilliant so far, I'm really enjoying reading this in my spare moments ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for your feedback! I am so glad that you are enjoyig the story. :)
Title: The Mall Trip 28 Oct 2009 12:04 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    'She was hopping around like a school girl and gave him a grin when he looked at her. She was definitely related to Dumbledore.'
    Oh cute! Wont Dumbledore be jealous he missed the toystore ^^

    Author's Response: Haha, yes I'm sure he would be, but don't worry, I'm fairly certain that he visits toystores in his free time anyway. XD Thanks for your comments!

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