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Title: The Tantrum 22 Jun 2009 12:29 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww....the long awaited tantrum. And it was all about noodles and vegetables, lol.

    Loved the chapter, btw. I love how you are very, very slowly leading Snape to the realization that Harry is just a boy with too many expectations on his small shoulders. The boy needs as many advocates as he can possibly get and having Snape in his corner is just what he needs.

    I loved Harry in this chapter. He is just a mess of little boy emotions and needs, isn't he? He definitely knows how to push Snape's buttons.

    Hoppity was great in this chapter, too. Maybe some of her gentleness will rub off on Snape soon.

    As for the subject of spanking, I neither agree nor disagree. After saying that, I do have to say that it would seem in character for Snape to be the type of 'parent' to use corporal punishment effectively. He definitely has a no nonsense approach to discipline, doesn't he?

    There are some fanfictions out there that deal with the idea of spanking in a very responsible way and are very well written. Then, of course, there are others that are all about the punishments. Either way, what you said is perfect....."please be educated about everything you read.' Wise words, indeed.

    Anyway, loved the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. More of gentle Snape moments, I hope. Thanks for sharing and take care.

    Author's Response: Thank you, curlybean for your review! :) I love reading your comments. Yes, I believe that more gentle Snape moments will come, but slowly. :) I only wish that I were a faster writer. Sorry for taking so long to update. Thanks for being so patient with me!
Title: The Tantrum 20 Jun 2009 2:30 pm
Reviewer: BasiliskPrince (Signed) [Report This]
    As I've said before, I love this story! I'm so happy to read it. I see why you choose not to use spanking in this chapter. I can see both sides of the argument when it comes to spanking but I'm not really here to talk about spanking now am I? XD So, Pizza and noodle tantrum. Love that...just like a kid to fuss over what's for dinner! Some stories never start to transition Harry into being a normal little boy because he was abused. The truth is he always was tough and had to be when he was denied all basic comforts. Even when he's very little now, I can see a very canon Harry here. I love this story. Your Snape is starting to soften just a tiny bit and I love it. Maybe they can teach Harry to swim...or something! Or maybe Harry will do something to deserve the humiliating sailor boy suit although it seems less likely now that Snape is softening. XD Anyways, keep going. You still have a reader right here, anxiously waiting.
    Your friend,
    BasiliskPrince

    Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much BasiliskPrince for your comments! :) Great ideas! I'm so glad that you can see a canon Harry. The sailor suit won't turn up for some time. :) Keep reading. and thanks for your support!!
Title: The Tantrum 20 Jun 2009 8:24 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter--your Snape was very compassionate without being out of character. I hope Harry's next day is a little better!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you PG! It will be a very eventful next day. Stay tuned! :)
Title: The Tantrum 20 Jun 2009 6:14 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you Rebel_Dream! :)
Title: The Tantrum 19 Jun 2009 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Ciara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you sooooooooo much for updating
    plz update again soon

    Author's Response: Thank you! I will try to!
Title: The Tantrum 18 Jun 2009 6:09 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific chapter...pleasu update quickly

    Author's Response: Thank you Poirot!
Title: The Tantrum 18 Jun 2009 3:13 pm
Reviewer: Tri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    as always, a pleasure to read from you. y
    thanks for updating

    Author's Response: You're welcome! thanks for your review!
Title: The Tantrum 18 Jun 2009 6:43 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very good. Agree about CP; I'm terribly bored with stories featuring it; they are all alike and don't consider the consequences.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: The Tantrum 18 Jun 2009 2:12 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad to see you back. Enjoyed he chapter. You can feel the frustration Snape has with dealing with a young Harry. Loved how Harry threw his little tantrum.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Yes, Snape gets rather frustrated, but I think that he is doing a remarkable job reigning it in! :) I think this vacation is good for him! That and the fact that he no longer has to spy on Voldemort.
Title: The Tantrum 18 Jun 2009 1:19 am
Reviewer: mahawee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    one of the greatest chapter i just love little harry and how angry he was that was so cute i love how snape deal with him that was so sweeet
    i was hoping harry would gave snape ahug and doesn't knew why he did it ...oh but that just me :)

    please update sooooon please don't take too long please this story is good it really sad for us to have to wait that long

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I am so glad that you liked it. Maybe eventually, Snape and Harry will hug. :) I will try to update sooner next time.

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