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Title: The Tantrum 17 Jun 2009 4:11 pm
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a wonderful day! I enjoyed the update. I like the way Snape is warming up to Harry. I hope Harry realizes soon how lucky he is to have Snape to have Snape to take care of him.

    Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed the update! Harry will take some time, but in the end he will understand how much Snape cares for him, and how important he is. Thanks for your comments!
Title: The Tantrum 17 Jun 2009 4:01 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought that Snape handled the situation very well. I was glad to see that Hoppity for the most part supported him as well. It is important for them to be united and I was actually surprised that she didn't fight Snape on his disciplining Harry, but I'm glad that she didn't.

    She shouldn't have really given him the toast, but I guess that especially for Harry given his background, it wouldn't do for him to go hungry, just because he's being stubborn, but at least she didn't give in and give him noodles.

    I'm so glad that you've updated and I'm looking forward to the NEXT update!! Which I hope will be soon?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for your review, Pandora! Yes, I felt that it was important for Snape and Hoppity to show a united front. It really isn't good for Harry to do without dinner because of his past and how skinny he is. They don't know it yet, but they will soon. I don't know if Harry would have been able to sleep if he was hungry. Probably, but it seemed a little too cruel for Hoppity to do. I think part of the reason why he was so cranky was because he was hungry.

    Sorry for taking so long to update! I think that future chapters will come easier. I just have to set time aside to write. I stayed up all night to write for six hours because the story came to me, and I wanted to make sure that I got it all. It's not beta'd at all, and I'm sure that I will find things to improve, but I'm just glad that I updated, honestly. It really was too long.

    Thanks for your review!!

Title: The Buildup to... 17 Jun 2009 3:45 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    My eyes almost flew out of their sockets when I saw that you had updated! I'm so pleased.

    I love the addition to the chapter too, and I can't wait to read "The Tantrum". I can just imagine. Snape has the patience of a...well I can't quite think of an analogy, because I just woke up!

    Author's Response: Thank you Pandora! :) I'm so glad that you liked the addition to the chapter.
Title: The Tantrum 17 Jun 2009 2:57 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, an update!!! Yay! Thanks so much! This really is one of my favorite stories. Harry truly was being a brat. I love the boy, but being the oldest of 6 children in the family, I felt bad for Snape this time around. ;-)

    But Snape putting Harry to bed was adorable. Sigh. I love this story. Have I mentioned that? ;-)

    Good work! I can't wait to see what ya have in store for us next!

    Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much for your review! I am so glad that you like the story so much! :) Sorry for taking so long to update!
Title: The Tantrum 17 Jun 2009 2:46 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good to see an update :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you enjoyed! Thanks for being so patient with me.
Title: The Situation 12 Jun 2009 6:00 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    I just wanted to drop ya a line and let you know how much I have been enjoying this tale of yours. You're such a creative writer and the plot is so original. I really like to review every chapter of stories I like, but this'll have to do for the night, as it is getting late.

    Anyhow, thanks! This is one of my favorites! :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I am so happy that you have been enjoying the story. Thanks for the review!
Title: The Buildup to... 29 May 2009 6:19 am
Reviewer: Jen77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It has been a very long week. Any updates on the horizon? Love this story.

    Author's Response: Not yet. The chapter is half done, and has been that way since winter. I wrote a page or two since then, but not much. Just not inspired for this chapter, I guess. Thanks for checking up.
Title: The Buildup to... 08 May 2009 4:35 pm
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next part of the story.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I just posted it. :)
Title: The Buildup to... 23 Mar 2009 7:54 pm
Reviewer: ciara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please update!!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Alright! :)
Title: The Buildup to... 17 Mar 2009 1:59 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent story - am intrigued as to where it is going -please continue?!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

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