Potions and Snitches
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Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 27 Dec 2008 7:08 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was good. I wish Snape could learn to express what he's really feeling--maybe he'll learn that while he's here with Harry. I've always found that when I'm teaching kids, I often learn just as much, if not more than they do.

    I like how you sneakily had Snape tuck Harry in after he was already asleep. You can tell that Harry is growing on him, though I'm worried about the next chapter because it might make the progress go to waste.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yes, Snape will develop and change as the story progresses. Harry is indeed growing on Snape, but maybe that will change after the Tantrum. You will just have to see! Thank you for your review! :)
Title: The Buildup to... 27 Dec 2008 6:50 am
Reviewer: ranDum InSanity (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You updated! If I were there, I would give you cookies.

    Author's Response: I love cookies! :) Thanks!
Title: Secret Accident 27 Dec 2008 1:45 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Snape finally shows a pinch of affection! I've been waiting for this moment!

    Author's Response: Yup! There are going to be more scenes of affection coming up! Thanks for your review! :)
Title: The Splotches 27 Dec 2008 1:26 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol! I think this was my favorite chapter so far. I can't believe Snape actually went along with that!

    Author's Response: Yup! There will be many more fun things to come! Thank you for your  review! :)
Title: The Visit 27 Dec 2008 1:01 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness, that was hilarious. Goat rebellion...

    Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Title: The Buildup to... 27 Dec 2008 12:52 am
Reviewer: Tri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just love your story, and how IC Harry is, and those rare Nice-Snape moments, oh, and the name Hoppiti oh, and I'm waiting for when they realized about harry's bday, yay!!

    Author's Response: Oh hooray! I'm so glad that you like Hoppity's name, and the characterations of the characters. They will indeed remember Harry's birthday, but only when it's too late.
Title: The Buildup to... 27 Dec 2008 12:05 am
Reviewer: Dragon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay update! Please finish the story!

    Author's Response: I will do my best!
Title: Let's Play a Game 26 Dec 2008 11:46 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape playing video games--LMAO!

    Author's Response: Yup! I was way amused too. Thanks for your comment!
Title: Who Hurt Him? 26 Dec 2008 11:05 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm curious about what Severus thinks about all of this.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Perhaps I will write some one-shots, or someone else will after the story is finished, explaining more of Snape's point of view.
Title: In Which Bad Choices Are Made 26 Dec 2008 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think Snape has meant to hurt Harry, but it seems like Harry got a rug burn and a bruise on his head, not to mention the ones he had previously. Is anyone going to notice these?

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Snape did hurt Harry, but no one will notice. Later on, Snape will be more conscious of these things. Thanks for your review! :)

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