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Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 17 Nov 2007 3:56 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff, sniff* That was amazing. I almost cried at the end. Poor, Snape. *sniff*

    The next chapter sounds interesting and I can't wait for that one, so please update soon.

    This was an excellent chapter and I'm going to reread it now.

    Author's Response: Thank you, DoA!! I hope that you like the new chapter. Sorry for taking so long to update!
Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 17 Nov 2007 2:24 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay!!! An update. I absolutely love this story, so you can imagine how happy you've made me. I love the fact that Snape found himself feeling a little empathy for Harry. It was a fleeting moment, but it happened all the same. Definitely a step in the right direction.

    I wonder why Snape would give Harry a command (hover) that he couldn't possibly obey or realistically refuse to obey. I'm sure there is a reason, I just can't figure it out. Seems like it would have been much better to command him to do something like sit or dance, but I'm sure I'll never understand how Snape's brain works.

    Anyway, thanks for the wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. The tantrum? Doesn't bode well for Harry, does it? Take care...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your review!!I am so glad that you like the story! Snape is trying to help Harry realize that he can stop himself from doing commands that make no sense, and that he doesn't want to do. If Snape gave Harry a command he could do, like to sit, well Harry would do it, and it would build the pathways in his head that would reinforce his obedience. However, not being able to do something coul, in theory, reinforce the pathways in his brain to disobey mind magoc. I hope that that made sense.

    Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you will enjoy the new chapter, if you are still reading.

Title: Snape's Trap 12 Nov 2007 12:30 am
Reviewer: xoxamandaxox (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story its really original i hope you update soon xxx

    Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
Title: The Mall Trip 02 Oct 2007 5:26 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like a fairly successful shopping trip! I felt bad for Harry when he was remembering how the Dursleys would try to leave him, and how relieved he was when Snape came back for him. I wonder if Snape will notice those bruises? It might help to soften him up a bit.

    I bet Harry had a great time picking out all those toys, and Snape having to explore the mall was quite funny.

    Author's Response: Yes, Snape will discover those bruises, but it is the trust that he will have to work on over time. Thank you so much for your review! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
Title: Settling In 02 Oct 2007 5:12 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, it sounds like they have a really nice house to stay in, at least. I like the sounds of Harry's bedroom, especially.

    I can sympathize with Hoppity here--grocery shopping can be overwhelming even when you know what you're doing!

    And when is Snape going to wake up and smell the coffee? Does he really think he can live in splendid isolation here?

    Author's Response: Haha, Snape will learn quickly that they are not as safe as he thinks they are. Thanks for your review! :)
Title: Not Another Plane Ride 30 Sep 2007 4:23 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved it! The joys of travelling with squabbling children--there's nothing quite like it. Those of you who are not parents yet just don't know what fun is ahead of you! It was one of the times I could sympathize with snarky Snape.

    No wonder poor little Harry is all tired out. They've had quite an adventure already and they're not even 'home' yet!

    Author's Response: Yup! Thanks for reading and for your comments! :)
Title: Agent D, and the Spotting of the Dragon 23 Sep 2007 10:53 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Snape,sufrering from motion sickness. I don't get motion sickness, but I don't like flying so I can sympathize.

    I liked his suspicious nature about Agent D, and the mental image of Hoppity exploring the gift shop and worrying about Muggle money.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Welcome to British Airlines 22 Sep 2007 9:25 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    There were lots of cute little things here! I loved Hoppity and Harry playing with the air vents, and I can imagine Snape's disdain.

    Harry's excitement was so sweet. A first plane trip is pretty exciting, especially for a child.

    Hope the airline doesn't lose the tea set box.

    Author's Response: Awww, thanks for all of your comments! Unfortunately, the tea set was lost. I hope that there will be many more cute things to come! Thanks for your review!
Title: Introductions 21 Sep 2007 8:06 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    So now the adventure begins! Oh, poor Snape--is he really the ugliest man Hoppity's ever seen?

    And what were her parents thinking? Although as someone with a unique name myself, I can't really talk.

    Also can't blame Harry for not wanting Snape to be in possession of his wand, but it does seem like the best solution under the circumstances.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Haha, it's more like, What was the author thinking? LOL. Thanks so much for enjoying the story and for commenting. I really appreciate it.
Title: The Deaging Potion 21 Sep 2007 8:00 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter again! It's nice to finally see a potion that tastes good--seems like most of them are quite nasty. Then again, considering the ingredients that go into them, what can you expect?

    I bet Harry is just adorable--I'd love to see him as a six year old.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! More is forthcoming. :)

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