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Title: The Deaging Potion 26 May 2007 5:03 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I especially like how fast this is happening. Harry was just attacked and in less then 24 hours Dumbledore has a plan set into action. It seems very Dumbledore like. Anyway, (and I'm sure you're tired of hearing this, but...) on to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yup, Dumbledore can move fast when you wants to. Thanks for your comments! :)
Title: The Third Party 26 May 2007 4:50 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter I like Snape's characterization. I especially like when he metioned the gender changing potion: "...let me assure you I am quite allergic..." lol. Anyway, on to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Hahah!! Thanks for recalling that line, I had forgotten!
Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 26 May 2007 4:43 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    First let me say this is not a flame, but I thought I would point out a couple inconsistances. This was still a good chapter and Hoppity seems to be a very interesting character and I can only imagine how Snape will react to her. But Albus tells Hoppity that he has to hide two people in the muggle world. Then not only does she ignor the fact that he said 'hide' (Ex; what exactly do they need hiding from. We know but she doesn't.) Also Albus says two people but in the last line it sounds as though he's still searching for the third person. As I said this is still a good chapter and I certianly didn't mean this to sound harsh. Anyway, On to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks, critiques are more than certainly welcome. When I revise this chapter, I will keep your comments in mind! I don't think that Hoppity really thinks about inconsistencies, especially when it's Dumbledore talking. She's not meant to be the brightest crayon in the box.
Title: The Situation 26 May 2007 4:31 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    This sounds really interesting so far. This chapter is very well writen. Anyway, on to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you! :) Onward, ho!
Title: Snape's Trap 26 May 2007 6:55 am
Reviewer: mmcgonagall (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story! I'm so excited to be reading the updates! Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
Title: Snape's Trap 22 May 2007 12:57 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad to say I finally finished reading everything but I'm also sad becuase there aren't anymore chapters to read! I really like this story so far. Harry is so cute with the childlike things he does eventhough he's supposed to be 16. Just out of curiousity, but will Snape or Hoppity ever realize they missed his birthday? I'm thinking that would make a great chapter and I can just see Snape scowling if a few kids came over. I love this story and I really hope it wont be too long before the next chapter is up!

    Author's Response: Awww, sorry! I will try to update more. It's really been too long between updates. Snape and Hoppity will realize that they missed his birthday when you get back to Hogwarts. They will have to throw him a party then, of course!
Title: Snape's Trap 21 May 2007 10:22 am
Reviewer: animealam (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you finally updated! :)

    This was a great chapter. I think that despite still being snarky you're gearing Snape into a parental figure. Are you planning to make him a bit more caring?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!

    Yes, Snape will be more of a parental figure for Harry, and he will become more caring. It will take time, however. Thanks for your review! 

Title: Snape's Trap 20 May 2007 7:08 am
Reviewer: Jen77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Will this involve any corporal punishment? Snape did say he would tan his hide if he meddled again. I like this story, snape is turning into a good Daddy. I think he should have a parents'night and be introduced to his teachers. .."Oh, so this is Harry's daddy! He is such a well-behaved boy you must be so proud." I can see snape ready to sick up at that one.

    Author's Response: No, no corporal punishment. Snape likes to make threats. There will definitely be a parents' night! Thanks for your reviews!
Title: Snape's Trap 19 May 2007 8:54 pm
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow. I'd given up on this story. I'm so glad I decided to check this website today or I probably wouldn't have found this new chapter. Thank you so much for the update. I hope the next one comes sooner.

    Author's Response: If you log in and favorite this story, you can get an e-mail alert next time it is updated if you set that preference in your personal preferences. :) Thank you for your review!
Title: Snape's Trap 19 May 2007 12:13 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Yah!!! Another chapter. I was just about to turn off my computer and go to bed when I saw that you had updated. You've made my day.

    I love your Harry. He is so cute, and just the right mix of little-boy-Harry and teenage-Harry. He is definitely willful and stubborn at times, ALMOST a match for Snape. And I love that we can see a wee bit of softening with Snape. I predict that by the end of your story, Snape will love Harry as much as we do.

    I don't know why, but I love to see 'stern Snape' trying to handle a disobedient Harry. He truly has no idea what he's doing, yet he always seems to do an excellent job. Very sweet.

    Anyway, thanks for the update. Hopefully it won't be too long before the next.

    Author's Response: I'm so glad that I made your day, even if it was so long ago. Thank you for all of your wonderful comments! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!

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