I was so suprised and excited that you finally had a chance to update. I absolutely love this story, and this chapter was great, I'm glad that Harry and Severus are slowly starting to work through Harry's abuse problems, and their personal relationship. Sev giving Harry a timeout, walking him all the way to his room was priceless. Keep up the great work and please update soon. LES
Author's Response: Thank you Lindsey! I was looking forward to reviews like yours when i updated. ;)
Awww cute chapter!! The ending was great!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :D
It was very exciting to see this had been updated! I like that you started the questions up again, though I would like to see Snape's reaction after the answer Harry gave him.
The Booby Trap thing is very Snape, it made me laugh. Poor Harry. Thanks for the great chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah? I'll see if I can go back and add Snape's reactions in. I thought that he was rather blank, hiding his emotions and reactions. Thank you for your review!
So you made their house with the Sims? That is so cool! (I love that game). I'd like to see that if you get a chance to add that link. This story is excellent so far!
Author's Response: Yes, with the Sims 1! The link is down because I broke all the image links and I have to go and repair them. I'll get it back up soon! Thank you for your review! :)
^_^ I love the ending! It's great that you pulled out all of Harry's favorite toys and whatnot. (I forgot the gooey lizards, I want one). It's cute how Harry played in his little cave... all quiet. Shows that he's still afraid of losing his things (seeing as Snape has taken his toys in the past), but he's still brave enough to play and have fun. It was a really cute ending to the chapter. And the whole chapter was great! I'm glad that you updated, I can't wait to read the next chapter (yes I and others will always want more). Keep writing and don't let the internet bugs get you down.
Author's Response: Aw, yay thank you for the review! I'll try not to let the internet bugs get me down. XD Love your review! Thanks again for the help!
Those people sure are being nice to little Harry. :) Just a quick point out- you said flight 117 earlier and 177 later. Just a small mix up I though I'd point out. Great story so far!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll fix that! Okay, fixed! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I loved it when he said, "let me assure you in advance that I am quite allergic." The Krispy Kreme password is cool too! It make me want to go get some right now but I think I'll read on instead. Great start so far! :)
Author's Response: LOL, thank you Alexis!
| Title: Snape's Trap
| 18 May 2007 7:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous)
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Harry was definately feeling better, with his attitude towards Snape. I think Snape makes a really good guardian, stern but fair and look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Tehe, I guess Harry did have an attitude in this chapter. What a rugrat! :) Thanks for your review!
| Title: Snape's Trap
| 18 May 2007 4:06 pm
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| Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous)
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Thank you for the update! It is great to see Snape and Harry's relationship continuing to develop.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, chmcm! :) I appreciate it!
Wow, a new chapter - thank you very much! Please update soon(er), I can't wait for the next :-)
Author's Response: You're welcome Teddy! Haha, I'll try!
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