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Title: Stealing Daisies 02 Oct 2006 10:40 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really like this story!

    Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks! :)
Title: Stealing Daisies 02 Oct 2006 7:05 am
Reviewer: Kasey (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Awesome, I love this story.



    Author's Response: Thank you Kasey! :)
Title: Stealing Daisies 02 Oct 2006 4:14 am
Reviewer: guest (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello, I just discovered your fic and have enjoyed it thoroughly thus far. I don't usually care for "wizards living as muggles" stories--how many times can they be bewildered by things like supermarkets and cars? But you made it interesting. I never get tired of "Snape takes care of ailing Harry" scenes. I suppose Harry and Snape will bond now that Hoppity is laid up? Will Snape catch the bug next? It would serve him right for being so smug and self-righteous about taking his Pepper-Up!

    Author's Response: Haha great idea! Unfortunately, that's not planned, but there's always room for one-shots later. Ouu... maybe it has room in the sequel. *ponders* I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far! :) Thanks for the review!
Title: Stealing Daisies 01 Oct 2006 4:37 pm
Reviewer: esmeralda (Anonymous) [Report This]

    yeah a new chapter and please don't let us wait so long for the next update please update soon.



    Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :) I don't know how long it will take for an update. Getting motivated and excited about the story myself helps a great deal, otherwise everything I write comes out like mush.
Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 29 Sep 2006 8:20 pm
Reviewer: Kirinin (Anonymous) [Report This]

    "....people would think me of favouritism". I like this story... there are some typos, tho. Do you have a prereader?

    Having Dumbledore as a relation DOES explain everything. I like Hoppity so far.

    -K



    Author's Response:

    Favouritism is not spelled wrong. I use British spelling.

    No, I do not use a prereader. Please point out the typos so that I can correct them, however kindly do not point out British/American spelling differences unless I use the American one as I will ignore any British spelling uses pointed out as "mistakes". :)

Title: The Situation 29 Sep 2006 8:15 pm
Reviewer: Kirinin (Anonymous) [Report This]

    constringent... do you mean a "contingent" of Death Eaters, or is this just a word I don't know?....

    Interesting premise!  I like it so far.



    Author's Response: Yes, I probably meant contingent. Glad you like it so far.
Title: Stealing Daisies 29 Sep 2006 7:29 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]

    You did a very believable job with the interaction in this chapter.  Snape is efficient and even a little kind without going all ooey-gooey.  It's rough being sick when you're six!



    Author's Response: Thank you! it sure is, poor Harry!
Title: Stealing Daisies 29 Sep 2006 7:14 pm
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love this story, especially the interaction between Snape and Harry. We can see the realationship and understanding growing between the two. And I love the character of Hoppity. But I think that I am at the point where I'm ready for *something* to happen. Bad guys come or more Dursley abuse is discovered. I just feel like we're being set up for some big plot change or character shift, and now we're just waiting for that to happen.

    As I said, I love the story and I'm looking forward to the next step.

    Author's Response: Well you're right about something happening, but I don't think it'll happen as soon as you think. Some other things have to happen first, remember the purporse of this tsory is to add in as many Snape and Harry situations as possible. Just sit tight. :) thanks for the review.
Title: Stealing Daisies 29 Sep 2006 6:19 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) [Report This]

    An update!  You are awesome!

    I loved this chapter!  Snape was so fatherly to Harry in this chapter, and yet he stayed in character too.  I do like how you are gradually softening Snape up to Harry.  Harry's whining was so cute too, but it didn't work with Snape, hee hee.

    The flowers for Hoppity was sweet too, I'm surprised that Snape gave them to her, but that was nice touch.

    I laughed at Harry antics to try to get out of a lesson with Snape, too funny!

    Just loved this whole chapter-fantastic!!! 

    Update when you can!!!



    Author's Response: Thank you! thank you! Snape was trying to get Harry to get him some more flowers, that's partly why he was so nice with them. Thanks for the review! :D
Title: Stealing Daisies 29 Sep 2006 5:56 pm
Reviewer: DeepPoet117 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lol at the ending. Good chapter. I'm happy you updated. Please update again asap.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

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