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Title: Secret Accident 07 Jun 2006 11:38 pm
Reviewer: americanpie (Anonymous) [Report This]

    YAY! Harry got tucked in by Snape. What happened to the sploches? And did Snape call Harry 'Harry'? Wow. Can't wait for the next update.

    ~Americanpie 



    Author's Response: The Splotches disapeared... they were just bug bites and the stuff Snape had made them disappear. Yes, he sure did call him Harry. I thought it was a good of time to make the transition as any. Thanks for the review!
Title: Secret Accident 07 Jun 2006 6:06 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) [Report This]
    OH, another chapter!  You are so wonderful!!!  I loved it!  Poor Harry having an accident!  I know how that can feel, as I have a young daughter, who occassionally has an accident.  It's very neat how Snape helped him out, of course he had no choice, but he did a good job of it, and stayed in character.  I do think he was a bit of a git to tell Hoppity, but I liked how you had Harry apologize to him and Snape patted the top of his head.  I think he's starting to develop a soft spot for his young charge.  I so love this story and hope you can update again soon!  It's fantastic!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much carrie! :D Hehe, but Snape IS a git, isn't he?
Title: Secret Accident 07 Jun 2006 10:14 am
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]

    Yay, and update!

    You've kept everyone very in character, and Harry is absolutely adorable in this chapter. I loved how Snape was the one who had to help him clean himself up. Is Harry still sleeping under the bed?

    Great job with this, and please, please update again soon!

    Author's Response: I don't think that he is but that doesn't mean that an incident in the future might make him do so again. Thanks so much! :D
Title: Secret Accident 07 Jun 2006 6:28 am
Reviewer: Achilles (Anonymous) [Report This]

    AWWWWW!!!!!!!! The second half of this chapter was soooo sweet! All the fluff is actually making me a bit high. lol. j/k. I loved this chapter though. I think this one is my favorite out of all of them. Great job! Update soon!

    Author's Response: Wow, great! Hehe a fluff high. Thanks for the review!
Title: Secret Accident 07 Jun 2006 5:51 am
Reviewer: Krazey_Forever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh yes, an UPDATE! I could run down the street screaming, I'm so happy. Very good chapter, I remember playing soccer at Harry's 'age' - it was chaos - and the Pizza Hut trip after the game, oh I miss those days. Poor Harry having an accident, I felt really sorry for laughing. I absolutely adore your portrayal of Snape, and your OC, Hoppity, isn't an annoying twit like most authors. Great chapter, once again, and I will patiently wait for the next update (not like I have any choice in the matter, is it?)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! And thanks for waiting so patiently. I'm so glad that this chapter reminded you of the days you played soccer and had pizza afterward. :)
Title: Secret Accident 07 Jun 2006 5:38 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]

    That's great! Poor Harry, that would be so embarrassing... I think it's cute that Snape called him Harry in the end. Seems like Harry is getting to him.


    Author's Response: Yup! He sure is. :) I hope that you enjoy future chapters as they slowly grow closer.
Title: Secret Accident 07 Jun 2006 4:29 am
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    2 updates so soon is absolutely wonderful! Thankyou,  thankyou, thankyou

    Author's Response: Welcome! I'm glad it was so wonderful for you. :)
Title: The Splotches 06 Jun 2006 2:29 am
Reviewer: FallenShadowedAngel (Signed) [Report This]

    Love it love it love it!!!

    Wonderful and well worth the wait!!

    Will this be posted on ff.net as well??

    Cheer-i-o!

    *~v~*Fallen Shadowed Angel*~v~*


    Author's Response: Thank you! :) It will be posted on FFN, but later.
Title: The Splotches 05 Jun 2006 11:43 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    As summer heats up down South, I sure wish we could get Severus to come whip us up something for mosquito, chigger, and tick bites!

    Author's Response: hehe, I've often wished for a potion like that...
Title: The Splotches 05 Jun 2006 5:32 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) [Report This]

    I read the last two chapter, cause I missed the last one somehow.  Wonderfully done and so glad you updated!  And hear chap. 20 will be coming along soon?  You rock!  These chapters were very funny!  I love the Snape/Harry interaction and hope there will be more of it soon!

    Great job!

    Author's Response: Yup, I just posted chapter 20. Enjoy and thank you for your review! I appreciate it.

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