Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Muggleville
Title: The Splotches 05 Jun 2006 9:36 am
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay!  It's nice to see a new chapter.   Looking forward to some more.

    Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Title: The Splotches 05 Jun 2006 6:15 am
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YES!!!!! An update! I was wondering if you'd given up on the story. The Splotches. lol. Great job. Is Benny going to be like the Creevys? At first I thought the Splotches were chicken pox. You should have Harry get chicken pox! That would be very interesting, seeing Snape take care of a sick Harry? Has Hoppity or Snape ever had the chicken pox I wonder? If they catch them from Harry, oh dear, that would be miserable. Maybe no chicken pox then. Maybe something else though. Oh well, it's your story, do what you want with it, though, please do not ever leave us hanging that long again. Ever. I didn't like it. UPDATE SOON!!!

    Author's Response: Yes, pretty much. It's already planned that Harry will get sick, you can't have a deaging story without a sick!Harry scene! Thanks for the review!
Title: The Splotches 05 Jun 2006 5:21 am
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story. The end of this chapter is fantastic. Snape loosening up is wonderful - and he does it in character. How do you manage? I'm terribly jealous. Anyway, I always love seeing updates on this wonderful, wonderful story.

    Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!! :D *claps hand happily*
Title: The Splotches 04 Jun 2006 5:15 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very cute.  Think I could get a laughing potion? It might help at my house.  wonderfully written.  IT flowed smoothly, hmm anything else you want to know?  The chapter was refreshing (sp?). ;)

    Author's Response: :P If only... Thank you for your comments! :D
Title: The Splotches 04 Jun 2006 11:29 am
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! I love this story and everything about it. Please update again soon.

    Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! Keep reading. :)
Title: The Splotches 04 Jun 2006 10:33 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great! So cute and funny, I loved it. I'm glad you're still updating your story. This is the first story that takes place in muggle land that I actually like. I love Snape's irratation at everything. I can't wait till you write more! 

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks! :D
Title: The Visit 27 May 2006 9:54 am
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    Please update this soon!!! Harry is adorable, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Done! :D
Title: The Visit 22 May 2006 6:27 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I love your story. I hope you're still working on it. (I see you haven't updated in awhile). So now for a worthy review... For starters, I loved how Snape got sick on the airplane! In fact, I like how you portray Snape in the whole story. His driving skills, like an old woman lol! I like your original character a lot, especially how she stands up to Snape and is so nice. Oh and then the visit, the goat rebellion... I laughed hysterically! Also, I really enjoyed the 'family' dynamic. I look forward to an update, I noticed you have lots of plans for the story and I'd really like to read the rest...

    Author's Response: Yes, I am still working on it. I just don't seem to be able to sit down and actually loose myself with writing it. I will try though! Thank you for sharing what you liked! That helps remind me of what's in the story and where it's going. :)
Title: The Visit 14 May 2006 5:58 pm
Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Hello there!  Lovely story... positively charming... please update soon, I loved it!

     Is this an actual tea?

    Saphire Starlet


    Author's Response: It's a made up tea, it's supposed to be magical but not too magical. Subtle. Thanks for your kind words and for your review! :)
Title: The Situation 05 May 2006 5:31 pm
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    I know that you're tremendously busy, but I love this story. I hope that you get a chance to update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your understanding. :) I want to update soon but we'll see what comes out.

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