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Reviews For Muggleville
Author's Response: Ah, don't worry about it. That was just a muddle transition chapter that I didn't really work into it. We'll get to how the story is within the next chapter or two and then the people who like that kind of story will love it and those that don't, won't and will probably stop reading. :) So you should probably wait until chapter 20 to decide whether you want to continue. It will be lots of Snape and Harry scenes, with lots of Harry kid scenes dispersed throughout. I just have to go back and get everything fitting with each other better, the stuff that's already posted and the new stuff. Man, I didn't know that it would be this hard when I started, but i guess that's what happens when you take material that it a year and a half old and try to make it fit with your new writing style, new scenes, and a new direction the story has ended up taking. Okay, I need to actually stop talking and go work on that now. XD Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Yeah, I posted the first scene like a month ago. This part of the story was really hard, i would have liked to see more Snape and Harry interaction as well but what I had written down earlier.. it was just a muddle through and I just needed to get through it so that I can get into my stride of how the rest of the story is going to be like. I originally wrote all the Snape and Harry scenes more than a year ago, so I'm taking old material and trying to wrap it up into a cohesive story with the way the story has grown. It will probably be more of a "scene here", cute stuff "scene here" "aw poor Harry" type of the rest of the story but i need to get back and somehow get everything to blend and work RIGHT, something that I'm not up to right now as I really need to get the future stuff out first before I could see where I needed to meld it, lol. But thank you so much for your review. :) I'm glad you were able to be patient and get through it.
Author's Response: Thanks Angie. :) you always know what to say to make me feel better. *sigh* I'll just come back to this chapter after I finish number 20 and fix it all.
Author's Response: haha, you're welcome. :) To be honest, i have no idea what Snape is going to do with the T-Rex, I'm not sure if we'll hear about it again before the sequel. I wrote in the scene as filler, so it wasn't worked in to be anything in the future. But thanks. :)
Author's Response: Aw, you poor baby! unfortunately, Snape will not tuck Harry in in the next chapter. It will not happen within the next 3-5 chapters, I just checked the itinerary. Sorry, sorry but the bonding between Harry and Snape is done really slowly to make it believable. And what I'm stuck on right now is a big clump of time where Snape and Harry barely have any interaction. I'm stuck on writing a day at school for Harry that's really horrible, an accident, more school and a soccer practice, with two Occlumency scenes thrown in- and everyone knows that Occlumency scenes are the hardest because they have to be in about every single Snape and Harry fic and they get old after awhile so you have to come up with something new and unique every time. But the good news is that as soon as I work out those three days, I will be able to update so much more faster! The rest of the story is basically scripted around every single Snape and Harry interaction i could fit in, all of which are mostly written. So if there's a long scene where Snape has to take Harry to the doctor, or to the park or save him from certain death, it's already written and I just have to write up the short scenes like how sick Harry felt at school or something. Well hopefully. There are still some bits that I have to wrok out. But since you seem like you are going to expire without knowing how SNape will tuck in Harry, i'll tell you: (subject to change) Author's Response: Snape pulled the forgotten chair over to the bed and sat down. "Well, Potter. Looks like an awful mess you've got yourself into yet again." In response Harry just weakly turned his head away from Snape to face the wall. He was hot and uncomfortable and that awful nauseous feeling was creeping back into his stomach. He was almost startled when Snape reached out and resettled the little boy back in the middle of the bed and pulled the blanket back over the fevered body. Harry didn't want them on, and said as much, but Snape just told him to be silent and tucked the blankets in tight. Casting about for something to distract the boy, Snape spied a stack of books. He went through them and pulled out The Velveteen. He had intended to come in here and steal the book to read it later to figure out what he had done wrong by bringing back the boy a stuffed rabbit. This was the perfect opportunity. He opened the book and began to read, hoping that his familiar voice would make the boy drift off. "There was once a velveteen rabbit, and in the beginning he was really splendid..." And i'll try to incorporate as many tucking in scenes in the rest of this story that I can, just for you. They may have to come near the end though. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: thank you. :) okay, I will try.
Author's Response: How did you know?!? O.O LOL. I guess your wish is my command! Thank you and thanks for the review! :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked the chapter! :D Yeah, Harry really IS unspoilable. I'm sorry your review disapeared! Sometimes if you leave a html tag open it eats up the rest of the message, or if youposted your review two days ago, our servers like went offline for a hardware upgrade and probably reloaded our site at an earlier time. :( But thanks for your review! :)
Author's Response: Indeed. :)
Author's Response: :) Hiyas! I'm so glad that you like my fic! Thank you for your compliments! |
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