| Title: In Which Bad Choices Are Made
| 06 Jun 2005 10:01 am
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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What a good chapter! The scene where Harry was snooping around in Snape's room for his wand was excellent! Poor kid. I bet Snape is even more intimidating when Harry is in his younger body. I'd have a hard time not bursting into tears everytime the man barked at me, but then Harry was raised by the Dursleys so I guess he's used to rougher treatment than most kids would be. Anyway, this was a fun chapter. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I was a rotten kid so I probably wouldn't have burst into tears but I sure would have kicked him! And probably burst into tears at the same time.. I was a weird kid. Yeah, Harry's showing his upbringing clearly. I wonder if his guardians will start to notice?
| Title: First Day of School
| 06 Jun 2005 9:57 am
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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My favorite part in this chapter was the breakfast scene. Poor Harry! All that trouble to try and help and it got him nowhere! It was very realistic how frantic he was to try and fix the situation once he thought that he had messed things up, and in turn ended up just making things worse. That seems to happen to us all unfortunately. Great Job! :)
Author's Response: Poor Harry. : *pats his messy head* I am so terrible to him, aren't I? Thanks for the revew!
| Title: Who Hurt Him?
| 06 Jun 2005 5:32 am
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| Reviewer: RavenRose (Anonymous)
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I'm so pleased you finally updated! Yeah!!!!! I really like the thought of Severus having to get in touch with his more caring side (even if it takes a rogue bludger to knock down his walls). Update again soon. RavenRose
Author's Response: :) *gets ready the canons* Target the walls! hehehe... thanks for your review!
Jan I hated it! How could you make such a chapter? ROTFL. no Jan it was good. And now having time to really read it, it was wonderfully written. So now what happens? hm?
Author's Response: Noooooooo! oh wait, you liked it? *BOP* :P ou, I'm so glad that you thought it was written well. *sigh of relief* But you KNOW what happens next! Why should I tell you? :) (Actually i've forgotten, time to look at the notes!)
| Title: Trampolines are Forbidden
| 03 Jun 2005 7:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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You stupid child, we are far, far away from any Medi-wizards. If you injure yourself, you shall have to deal with Muggle practices. Do you know what they do in Muggle medicine? They cut people up and sew their wounds closed with string. And do you know what they do with broken bones? Nothing! They leave them alone because they can't-do-anything!" He lightly shook the boy to get his point across. "If you break your neck, it will stay broken!"
That line right there is just ooohhh crazy good! There is so much about this chapter that I really liked that I'll probably forget to mention a lot of it but eh. All the dialouge between Snape and Hoppity was great. Snape is such a git!
That part where Snape was all concerned about Harry jumping on the tramp was awesome. I know I mentioned the wording earlier, but the things that were unsaid were great too. I got that tight feeling in my stomach, lol.
You know how you said this chapter went on forever? That's not really a bad thing. I found it to be rather fun to read. Thanks so much for sharing!
--Corbin
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your reviews! And the rewording of that part was a treat for me too. I got the tingly stomach! hehe. :D Thanks again!
Gah, this chapter reminded me of how I hate shopping for clothes! I hate it so much (shopping, not the fic)! Especially pants!
lol, man I can't believe they didn't let him wear the shoes out of the store. (I know I said something about that on the other site, but eh)I used to do that as a kid! I don't do that anymore, but I remember thinking it was great to wear the new shoes home and have the old ones in the box. hehe good job!
Author's Response: I used to do that too! I loved it- the new shoes felt so great and you felt like you culd fly and jump without effort (at least if you were skinny or something haha). Yeah i don't do that anymore either because it seems so childish. XD
Lol! I loved how Harry didn’t know what the heck he wanted when he first woke up. That’s just like a little kid to be that way, and it was so cute! Harry’s discovery of his bedroom was fun. The description in this part was done very well. (Almost made me jealous, hehe) Great stuff!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you!! :D :D
| Title: Not Another Plane Ride
| 28 May 2005 3:02 am
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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The part with the fighting kids is perfect! Makes me want to smack 'em upside the head (just kidding, hehe). Great Job!
Author's Response: Smack em! Smack em! hehehe
| Title: Agent D, and the Spotting of the Dragon
| 28 May 2005 2:59 am
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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Eww motion sickness is no fun! Being sick at all is lame, but being sick while flying sucks!
I always hate takeoffs and landings whenever I fly somewhere. It just always feels so yucky to me... (maybe like a portkey, lol).
Author's Response: Yeah. : I don't get sick on the plane but the large dips always hurt my head. It's hard to explain... I'm just sensitive to free fall and whenever the plane does it, I react like I'm in pain and I can't help it. Is that what you're talking about too? It'd be interesting if you were, I don't know anyone who reacts the same as me. I can't go on roller coasters for that reason- I went on the tower of terror and I was crying as soon as we started to fall. Never again.
| Title: Welcome to British Airlines
| 28 May 2005 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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I loved how excited Harry was about flying for the first time! That was so cute :)
ohh something else I liked was how he noticed that he could hear Snape walking. Hehe I wonder if Snape has to think about walking normally instead of "floating" from place to place ;)
Author's Response: Does Snape usually float? I think he glides... he probably thought about it all the time but by now he just does it naturally. I bet it shocked him a little when he started to hear his footsteps on that metal ramp thing... XD
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