Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 10:57 pm
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes, please continue.  I like your interaction between the two and I'd like to see more of how Snape extracts his "revenge." 

    Author's Response: Thanks; I hope you like the evolution of their interactions.
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 10:23 pm
Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    update soon . i look forward to read more to this story


    Author's Response: I'm writing as fast as I can what with classes and everything in RL.
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 10:04 pm
Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow.  Brilliant... your Snape is so perfect, and his characterizations are great!  Please update soon!  I love it.

     Saphire Starlet



    Author's Response: Thanks so much! The encouragement means a lot to me.
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 7:37 pm
Reviewer: amerryberry (Anonymous) [Report This]
    PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Well if you insist ... :)
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Krazey_Forever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this very much and hope that you don't keep it as a one shot but add more. Of course that's just my vote but never the less I've shared it, eh?

    Author's Response: Thank you for sharing your vote and I appreciate the feedback.
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 6:29 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my, that was stupendous.  I really like your take on this so far. 

    Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 5:45 pm
Reviewer: Achilles (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooh! Are you going to continue this? I hope you do. I really enjoyed it.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 5:28 pm
Reviewer: greeneyes (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Poor Harry!  But a very good portrayal of a neglected, abused child.  And I loved Severus' struggle between his duty as Head of Slytherin and the man who hated the Potters and now has to deal with their son. 

     Thanks!



    Author's Response: Poor Harry, yes - but poor Severus - it isn't easy being him either, being all conflicted like that.
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 4:52 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Whoo! What an awesome beginning!! Wow, lol I loved how Draco told Snape what Harry was doing - sleeping with his shoes as a pillow was the kicker. Great job. I loved the meeting Snape and Harry had and it was a good choice to have it from Snape's POV. One minor thing I noticed though was that you used some descriptive words for Harry a little too often - waif, the huge green eyes. Those descriptions need to be nestled in better and not used as casually.

    You have something here, and i'm really excited to read more. Everyone's in charcter, and once more, even with a Slytherin sorting, the Hogwarts universe and Snape being his teacher seems so canon the way he's going about it. Good job!



    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the feedback and kind words.

    I used the repeated descriptions on purpose. Snape doesn't see Harry as a person just now ... only as an annoying child. It will get better, I think. 

Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 3:11 pm
Reviewer: maur4mee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope that you will continue with this story and that it is not just a one-shot.  Very well written and gripping story line.  I'd love to see how Severus will turn Harry into what he must become.  I'd rather Severus be Harry's mentor than Dumbledore.  I will watch this story -- it's on my favorites list.

    Author's Response: Yes, it will definitely be Severus for Harry's mentor rather than Dumbledore. Somehow I don't think Dumbledore has it in him to understand what Harry's gone through.

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