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Title: Chapter Twenty-One 10 Jul 2025 9:35 am
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    i really liked this a lot

    poor mr gray though 

Title: Chapter Twenty 10 Jul 2025 9:32 am
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    i don't think harry should go to hogwarts when he's older, and i think snape should get a job somewhere else

    potions researcher, maybe

    so he can create and invent and improve

    he's not a good teacher, and he doesn't like it, which creates misery all around, and is especially unfair to kids who might otherwise have enjoyed and gone on to pursue potions

    anyway hogwarts allowing corporal punishment at all is to me actually the greatest sin and they fucking shouldn't

    no corporal punishment should be requirement #1

    also what's wrong with day school?? two years is NOT long enough to get over abandonment issues

    anyway people at hogwarts terrify harry one of them left him with the dursleys another CANED him the fucking bitch i hope she's regretting every time she ever used it but hogwarts shouldn't have permitted it in the first place

    poppy is there but him liking and feeling safe around the school nurse is not enough when he'd be daily forced to interact with someone who caned him and constantly under the power of someone who scares him who he thinks will force him back to the dursleys given opportunity

    it's not a good environment for either of them, honestly

    snape still associates hogwarts with misery and bullying and being forced back to his own abusive household

    neither of them HAVE to stay! they can leave! i'm glad snape already thought about that.

Title: Chapter Eighteen 10 Jul 2025 9:23 am
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    that's disgusting how the fuck does will even know that's something that happens

    i hope susan told her mother in detail exactly what he said and i hope he's bitterly regretting it now

Title: Chapter Fifteen 10 Jul 2025 8:15 am
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    good

    she should feel bad

    i hope severus twists the knife by asking her to imagine other children who kept silent and why they might have

Title: Chapter Fourteen 10 Jul 2025 8:12 am
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    when snape tells pomfrey what mcgonagall did pomfrey will help him murder her

     

Title: Chapter Fourteen 10 Jul 2025 8:12 am
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    i hope she dies, actually

Title: Chapter Thirteen 10 Jul 2025 8:09 am
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    snape i'd think you'd be able to recognize "terrified of the adult but trained not to back away" and "trained not to complain even if terrified of the adult"

    ffs the dursley's can wait you need to stop leaving harry alone with or having him in the same room as people who make him uncomfortable

    which is every adult except you and mr gray

    and maybe pomfrey

Title: Chapter Twelve 10 Jul 2025 8:04 am
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    oh good he didn't even do that i was mistaken

    snape excellent choice

    i hope snape invites mr gray around for tea and uses him as a babysitter

    it would make mr gray feel more comfortable if he got to know snape and snape would feel better having someone living in physical proximity who could keep an eye on harry or get to him fast

    with whom harry would be likely to hang out rather than wander about and get hurt

Title: Chapter Eleven 10 Jul 2025 8:00 am
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    i know snape thinks he's proving a point by tapping him lightly and then stopping but terrifying harry really isn't necessary

    and i'm worried that even if he uses that tactic what harry will remember is snape is willing to use the cane

Title: Chapter Six 10 Jul 2025 7:48 am
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    okay snape good mediocre job now how about you try apologizing


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