I'm so ecstatic you updated! It was quite a pleasant surprise.
I think it's great Harry got to redecorate his room, every kid should get to do that and it's another step to making Harry feel like a normal kid.
It was very sweet of Sev to allow Harry a birthday party, and Harry's reaction was so adorable! I look forward to reading about that party, should be a great experience for little Harry.
I would absolutely love it if you'd continue this story. I adore little Harry and love to read his and his new godfather's developing relationship. This is a very sweet story, I look forward to any new chapters you post!
P.S. Will Ron show up in your story sometime? I love the Weasleys!
| Title: Chapter Nineteen
| 19 May 2008 6:12 pm
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| Reviewer: SurrealJaenelle (Anonymous)
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Keep writing; what's going to happen next ? Will they meet the weasleys? How did Chloe know Snape was a wizard? Will they meet again?
| Title: Chapter Nineteen
| 19 May 2008 5:35 pm
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| Reviewer: writeurlife (Anonymous)
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took you long enough- lol. thanks for the update, and please, please! update soon. I love this story!
*Grins* arh this story so soppy but good soppy, would definitely like to read more! Your really good with people's pschye's, you capture the mind of an eight year old very well, i particular liked the part where Harry sent Dumble's flying on his arse, twas very funny to read.
Yay! You finally updated. I read this story a long time ago on FF.net and was hoping someday you would continue with it since I thought it was wonderful. I really like your POV and your Harry is so sweet and so sad at the same time and your Severus is great. Please continue writing. This is a beautiful story! And if you ever have time I would be honored if you would read one of mine, I have several posted here.
Thanks for updating. I thought you gave up this story. I love this chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens at harry's birthday party. please update soon.
bloody brilliant. Update soon!!
| Title: Chapter Eighteen
| 13 Jan 2008 10:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Slytherin_mafia (dixierebelgurl@hotmail.com) (Anonymous)
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What? *searches page* There's no more? Sniff sniff.....Great story hun! I love how you didn't immediatly drop Snape into the caring Guardian that so many people try to do when they write these fics, you actually caught the snarky surly character of our favorite Potions Master, and showed how the relationship is steadily changing and morphing into something healthy for both of them. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter Eighteen
| 04 Jan 2008 6:08 am
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| Reviewer: Ramos (Anonymous)
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I've been reading this story all along, and although I do like it quite a bit, I have one quibble. The narration from Harry's first person POV uses language and a vocabulary vastly beyond his age. I realize he's rather clever, and reads well, but there are certain phrases that are just far too poetic for a child his age. That makes it hard to keep in mind his relative age and experience.
| Title: Chapter Eighteen
| 29 Nov 2007 4:14 am
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| Reviewer: Anaknisatanas (Anonymous)
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Great story. I love Harry, he's abused but is slowly getting used to being around Severus. I thought that his accidental magic against William was great. I really want to see if Severus will return to teach at Hogwarts or if he just might home school Harry instead. Will we be seeing more of Poppy?
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