This is such an adorable story! Their relationship is so cute, I can hardly stand it! I like how in the beginning they didn't understand each other at all and you explained each of their point of views. It was occasionally confusing having 1st person point of views for each character, but I got used to it and ended up liking the personal narration.
| Title: Chapter Twenty-One
| 24 Nov 2015 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: abgu (Signed)
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I've read this story twice and absolutely loved it both times! Thank you so much for sharing!
aww how sweet. this is a great story so far. cant wait for more of this story. :)
| Title: Chapter Twenty-One
| 16 Aug 2013 6:48 pm
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| Reviewer: estella (Anonymous)
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This is by far my favorite Harry Potter fanfic.
"Seeming very much like a sprite during a moonlight revel", that is the best line for Dumbledore ever (:
I reached the Chapter End notes, read "This is officially the End," Said, no it's not! then looked for the next button =P Lovely story. I think I may have started reading it once before, but either never made it to the end or it wasn't completed when i found it the first time. I wish you luck on your novel.
AHAHA Snape's being evil! Ok, I think I'm more evil. Anyway, nice story! I love it at the beginning when both of them misundersatand each other.
Anyone Else feel like punching Vernon Dursely in this Chapter?
| Title: Chapter Twenty-One
| 02 Jun 2011 7:07 am
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| Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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This was a great story! It was so sad at times! But I loved how Snape finally figured out ways to be patient and explain things! Great job, really :P
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