| Title: Chapter Sixteen
| 21 Feb 2011 9:21 am
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| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous)
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Awwww hehe Harry sounds like me here hahaha When I first got into fos care, I was all quiet and reserved, only took things if offered. I was slowly taught to ask for things if I wanted, and kindly refuse if I did not. Lol and the first time I picked out games and toys I picked the smallest thing possible until my fos mum was like "nooooo pick something you like!" hehe how cute! luuuurrrvvveee this story!
| Title: Chapter Thirteen
| 21 Feb 2011 8:52 am
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| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous)
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It is really great, but I just think Harry is a little too pathetic sounding. He seems like he's four years old and mentally challenged. Also, his scar....There hasn't been mention of him having his scar?
| Title: Chapter One
| 11 Feb 2011 5:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Shhh (Anonymous)
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I LOVED this story - thanks! I think that Minerva was way too OOC!! But I'm glad it was resolved in the end! Thanks for the great story! I hope I find a sequel or two out there!
This was a wonderful story. Thank you.
"Feeling a bit triumphant and quite languid, I flaunted my disregard for Albus’ office by just missing the fireplace with my discarded ashes before lounging in a chintz armchair. I wanted to smoke the rest of my fag before leaving. This also served to show the headmaster I knew I was in charge of this situation."
Oh, I can just picture this. What a wonderful image!
Oh my. I now apprehensive.
You are good. That last scene with Gray stomping about the pub made me cry. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
I like the old tailor. Nice seeing Harry meet some normal decent people.
A good start. I like Ashton-Under-Lyne as a possibility. I had been thinking somewhere in Salford.
| Title: Chapter Twenty-One
| 14 Dec 2010 1:22 am
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| Reviewer: Amy (Anonymous)
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Please please please please write more to this story??
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