Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter Fifteen 25 Jan 2009 6:46 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Good grief.
Title: Chapter Fourteen 25 Jan 2009 6:38 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Could the smoke bring a bad memory to Harry?

    I like how you've given Snape habits that he doesn't really know about. It seems like he's almost an alcoholic, since he thinks about drinking every time something bad happens. I'm glad he can control it for Harry's sake.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Thirteen 25 Jan 2009 6:30 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh, something tells me that a lot of things are going to happen in that hour.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Twelve 25 Jan 2009 6:20 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Sometimes I get a bit confused when you change scenes. I think it would be better if you separated them more often with the dots that you used earlier in the story.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Eleven 25 Jan 2009 6:03 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...is this a dream, or is Snape just going to rub his back to prove that he won't beat him?

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Ten 25 Jan 2009 5:57 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for Snape being nice. I'm surprised he hasn't been pushed beyond his limits yet. I wonder if he'll be able to hold his temper or if he'll lose it again.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Nine 25 Jan 2009 5:46 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Couldn't breathe well enough to cry? Poor thing. I really like this story--good work! You've really played with my emotions.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Twenty 25 Jan 2009 1:47 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!!!! So sweet! I love how close they are getting but how human they are still, like Snape losing his temper. Flying was so cute!
Title: Chapter Twenty 25 Jan 2009 1:40 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. It's always such a wonderful surprise to see your story updated. I hope you will be continuing soon.
Title: Chapter Eight 25 Jan 2009 11:38 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh...

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