That was sad. Poor little guy...at least Snape was very understanding.
Thank goodness Snape got rid of the liquor--that was the worst moment of this, so far. I really hated when he was drunk because Harry didn't need to witness that.
-P.G.
Oh...Snape really doesn't know how to care for a child, does he? I feel bad for Harry--this is hard, yet he probably thinks it's better than the Dursley's.
-P.G.
Poor Harry--I wish Snape would actually look and see what is in front of him! Grr.
This is really good writing, btw. I like how Harry and Sev have their own distinct voices in this.
-P.G.
Aw, I'm glad Harry was happy with the shop man. It was nice to see him finally smile. I wonder how long it will take Snape to figure out what is really going on.
-P.G.
| Title: Chapter Twenty
| 25 Jan 2009 9:59 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Yeah! You've updated! Happy now.
(^_^)/
BEM
Uh-oh...Harry doesn't know about magic, so the apparition process might prove to be very interesting indeed. I really like this fic so far--good work.
-P.G.
So what IS his present from Poppy?
| Title: Chapter One
| 25 Jan 2009 5:36 am
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| Reviewer: Blue (Anonymous)
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What's a lorry?
In the UK it's what amaericans would call a trailer.
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