| Title: EIGHTEEN: the Cavalry
| 07 Apr 2014 12:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hmm, not surprising, Draco is an incredibly F**d up kid too. Harry gives him a sense of control and power and makes him feel good. He'll lose that if Harry dies - that and he isn't as cold blooded as he'd like to believe. Draco just doesn't realize that.
Author's Response: Very astute.
| Title: SEVENTEEN: Down in the Dark
| 07 Apr 2014 12:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Ooo, I really like this. In which Harry is showing signs of the strain and has discovered a great secret!
| Title: SIXTEEN: a Shift in Perspective
| 07 Apr 2014 12:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I like the Remus interaction with Snape too.
| Title: FIFTEEN: Hermione's Revenge
| 07 Apr 2014 12:04 pm
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Still waiting to see. Mirring other's actions is a time tested method to make them feel comfortable - under certain circumstances that is - torture is an exception.
| Title: FOURTEEN: Revealeo
| 07 Apr 2014 12:00 pm
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Hmm, still don't see that Snape didn't put a stop to Draco...but we'll see how that goes. Harry doesn't have the temperament to just forget - even accounting for the Obscura...
| Title: THIRTEEN: The Tower
| 07 Apr 2014 11:54 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hmm, I like it so far! Much more interesting than just another story about how much Harry is misunderstood by Snape - but the only unbelievable part of this is Snape allowing this to happen...and Dumbledore too because it will be irreversible - oh Ron and Hermione will forgive - Hermione will figure it out soon but Harry can't forgive himself that easily.
Excellent though!
| Title: TWELVE: Power and Prestige
| 07 Apr 2014 11:48 am
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Hmm, I didn't see any of it as flirting, just pushing each other's buttons?? Maybe I'll have to look closer but I recall being accused of flirting before when I was just trying to be nice - :-) maybe my "north" is just a little northwest.
Again I like how Draco is human - just trying to survive in a war he is worried about losing.
But HP is strongly heading towards being the next DARK LORD...kind of like it though so ok.
| Title: TWELVE: Power and Prestige
| 07 Apr 2014 11:47 am
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Hmm, I didn't see any of it as flirting, just pushing each other's buttons?? Maybe I'll have to look closer but I recall being accused of flirting before when I was just trying to be nice - :-) maybe my "north" is just a little northwest.
Again I like how Draco is human - just trying to survive in a war he is worried about losing.
| Title: ELEVEN: Conversations and Chemistry
| 07 Apr 2014 11:34 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Thanks for putting your list up - I'll check it out. Always good to find good fic. I found your under a review by Mudblood - great stories but unfortunately unfinished.
Good chapter, still waiting to see where Snape is going.
| Title: TEN: Cloak and Cauldron
| 07 Apr 2014 11:28 am
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Hmm, not really understanding why Snape is worried about Harry when his punishment would directly cause the aggravation of whatever possible, potential Obscura Harry might be dealing with?? Just have to keep reading and find out.
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