This is a spellbinding story. I love how you wrote Hermione's family situation and I find Cecily very interesting. Will she be a bad or a good person in the fic? I hope Prof. Snape will soon meet with Harry's and Hermione's guardians and do something. I also hope that nothing went wrong with Snape's Rescue Draco plan. You should make Snape much more like himself to Lucius since now Draco is in his hands.
| Title: Cesser
| 02 Jul 2008 10:55 am
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| Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous)
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I haven't reviewed earlier chapters simply because I couldn't pause long enough! Awesome job. I'm looking forward to reading more.
well done severus for getting draco out of there and if only harry can master occlumancy it will be for his benefit as well as others, harry will have to learn to trust severus and i hope he does
| Title: Knocking, Knocking
| 29 Jun 2008 5:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Dragon (Anonymous)
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Interesting scene with Snape. can't really see him being so passive.
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drug means medication. The word you are looking for is dragged the past tense of drag. Hope that helps.
i love this story update soon. Will Hermione's little sister come back in the picture
Great chapter and great story. I've been reading it from the start and I am sorry I did not have time to review sooner. I really look forward to reading more!
very good story.please update soon!
this story is very well written, very heart breaking at times, i hope harry, hermione and draco learn to heal under severuses care and a good ending to that chapter, never thought lucius would fool for such a trap, yay for severus and his cunningness
Wow! What an intense and very well done story! I hope you plan on continuing it. I've added it to my favorites and hope to see a new chapter sometime.
| Title: Vow
| 22 Jan 2008 9:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Amber (Anonymous)
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i liked it alot! at first i didn't really want to read it, but after the first page i couldn't stop!! very interesting.
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