Gleep! Ah!
Wow, didn't expect that! Oh, please update soon, I shall die if you don't!
-Elise
Oh, this is so good! I'm almost crying!
Poor, poor things!
All child-abusers should be thrown into Azkaban with a charm put on them that makes them suffer what they put their children through. Every hour.
Anyway, I love your Severus, and the way the kids are nice to each other is sweet.
Great story!
-Elise
Wow... Really powerful story... I love it!
Please write more!!
Okay... so I basically love you now and I'm hoping you update soon, or maybe even have the story stored somewhere else, or whatever, just keep going!!!
You are positively evil to end on a cliffhanger like that! You must write more; you seem to be able to "create" characters that the reader emphasizes incredibly. I need to know that Draco will be able to forgive Severus for doing what he had to do to free him from his father. I need to see what happens with Hermione. I implore you, please write more!
| Title: Vow
| 03 Jul 2007 2:35 am
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| Reviewer: Sayissild (Anonymous)
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oh are you KIDDING me?! this is getting really good and i'm very upset that this one "ended" right here. please keep going with it.
| Title: Vow
| 24 May 2007 10:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Kayla (Anonymous)
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O.O OH. MY. GOD.
I cannot BELIEVE how great your story is! update soon!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I will be updating within the next 2-3 weeks. :):):)
| Title: Vow
| 07 May 2007 9:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Derby (Anonymous)
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I am loving this story. Please don't leave me hanging. Update soon!!!!!
| Title: Vow
| 24 Apr 2007 3:21 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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AWESOME STORY!!!!! Hope you can update soon!!!!
| Title: Vow
| 29 Mar 2007 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: anon (Anonymous)
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Although I've kept up with this story, I've never been totally comfortable with it. It seemed that Snape was letting too much to continue without action. He just seems to be a highly reactive person. Now with chapter it seems that he may finally be taking some action. I think. I'm hoping to see a more in charge Snape emerging. Although, it will likely be difficult. He always seems to me to have a 'teenager' mentality. Perhaps as a result of his own insufficient upbringing his own maturity was delayed. I'd like to see him 'grow up' and become the adult of this group.
I hope I'm in tune with where you are going with this story and am not asking too much. I do love the way you write, from the point of view of a more flawed (and perhaps realistic) character than most.
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