Wonderful story so far.
I love it.
Thank you.
Oh, yes!
Good job, Severus.
Oooh... Please continue, this is getting really good! And when do Mr. Granger and Vernon Dursley get what's coming to them?
This is well done. Very good. I would suggest you find a publisher for some original stuff, if you have any. A publisher may accept some of your stuff.
But remember that a publisher will not accept anything on its first application. They are only that generous to longtime authors (I have felt the barbed tongue of publishers before. What a nightmare for my manuscript to be returned over and over with a pitying letter of non-acceptance!)
Hang in there!
* deep breath *
Just keep moving forwards. Miscommunications will happen, but good will is a powerful healer...
Tough kids. The professor is treating them with a certain amount of respect, and they are responding to it. What does Dumbledore know?
| Title: Punishment
| 02 Mar 2007 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: Immy (Anonymous)
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This is really good!!! I just can't wait for lucius to get killed or what have you and for them all to get emotionally better...
i love this story and how it is coming out please keep writing... i have to wonder what kind of internal injuries does severus have? is it just from the beatings or is something much more sinister at play.. hehe well i guess i'll just have to what to find out.
| Title: Punishment
| 21 Feb 2007 12:52 am
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| Reviewer: BrokenFlamesRebel (Anonymous)
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This is an outstanding story. Its so hard to find good storys but you made it onto my list. Please update as soon as possible.
You certainly keep the audience on the edge of their seat. I'm watching them start to work together, and I love it. Smart, tough people, healing and developing trust.
Good stuff.
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