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Reviews For Reading the Signs
Title: Chapter 20 06 Dec 2007 6:47 am
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, so sweet! And so sad!
    You are very good at making your readers 'see' your story, especially on the last paragraph, I could really see Harry running to Snape, and the signing, OH! I'm studying ASL, so the part about him signing 'sorry' against Snape's chest instead of his own was so amazingly sweet and very meaningful.
    This part was wonderful:
    “Me, I would feel nothing.” Harry’s face crumpled impossibly. Severus took several meaningful steps forward, but could not quite get all the way to the chair before he looked across the room and added, “I would feel nothing, Harry, because if something happened to you I do not think I would survive it."
    Oh, be still my heart! Aah!
    You are such a great writer, and this is a lovely story, please continue, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
    -Elise

    Author's Response:

    I'm incredibly pleased you liked the part about Harry signing against Snape's chest.  I'll let you in on a little secret: that particular moment was the catalyst for the whole story.  It just *popped* into my head one day and I scribbled it down.  Then I thought -- how on earth are the two of them ever going to get to that moment?

     

    You flatter me greatly with your words about my little story :) 

Title: Chapter 1 05 Dec 2007 9:28 pm
Reviewer: Will Drive You Mad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    “I would feel nothing, Harry, because if something happened to you I do not think I would survive it.”

    Author's Response: I hope that means you liked it :)
Title: Chapter 20 04 Dec 2007 10:41 am
Reviewer: morgana1616 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter! It made my day when I got home from work and found that you had updated!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you liked it so much!  Thank you.
Title: Chapter 20 04 Dec 2007 9:07 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh!!!*sniffles* It was wonderful and I loved it very much. You made me much too emotional for my comfort, you know? Though I thought the way Severus dealt with Harry about the Incendio spell was a little too severe, don't you think?

    Author's Response:

    I think everyone involved was a little too emotional for their comfort *grin*.

    As for Severus -- I don't think he was too harsh.  I mean, a little harsh, but this is Severus Snape after all.  And he had a very strong point to make.

Title: Chapter 20 04 Dec 2007 1:23 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah, an update! I love reading this story, it's so emotional and sweet. Please update again soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'll do my best :)
Title: Chapter 20 04 Dec 2007 12:23 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    This is good, like always, but isn't Snape a bit drawn out with the punishment?

    Author's Response: Yeah, it's a bit drawn out, but that's probably more my fault than his.  I needed to get them both to a point where Harry would "ask" his question and where Snape would answer it, and a bit of an emotional punishment and a fear of something happening to Harry would do that.
Title: Chapter 20 04 Dec 2007 12:23 am
Reviewer: ayana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh wow this was such a lovely chapter,there were tears in my eyes by the end , a wonderful job indeed! I will be waiting for your next chapter with impatience! ^^

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much! Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 20 04 Dec 2007 12:01 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    That was really sweet. I'm so glad Snape said what he did to Harry. It shocked me to the core but it was a good shock. I liked the trip to the burn ward, too. That was a good idea. Good chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm glad he said what he did too, though no one really expected it.  I'm glad you liked the trip to the burn ward - it seems to be getting mixed reviews ;)
Title: Chapter 20 03 Dec 2007 11:32 pm
Reviewer: LeannaJOan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was good! You are one of t he most talented writers around!

    Author's Response: Such a big compliment.  Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 20 03 Dec 2007 10:11 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Uh, why didn't Snape ask him what he was burning? For that matter it was a little unclear...was it the christmas note that promised to obey that Snape used on him? Burns are a horrific thing and seeing the ward should have been more than enough for one day, Snape pushed it way too far by going into gruesome book stories and given that this is the magical world that invented the Brothers Grimm that would be saying something, even for children's books.

    Author's Response:

    Harry was burning the list of "suspects" that he and Hermione and Ron had put together.  He was frustrated because Snape was still listed on it.  As for why Snape didn't ask him -- simply because it didn't occur to me to have him do so!

    Thank for the review. 


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