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Reviews For Reading the Signs
Title: Chapter 13 15 Sep 2007 4:44 pm
Reviewer: morgana1616 (Signed) [Report This]
    This last chapter was amazing. I loved the entire thing!!!!! I cannot wait for more.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Chapter 14 is up now :)
Title: Chapter 13 12 Sep 2007 12:07 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    You're right! I never noticed that plot hole. But it just allowed you to write this beautiful piece of angst. And are you giving a hint at an aspect of Harry's attack that wasn't clear before?

    You correctly spelled "vial" twice, but the first time you used it it is "vile." Maybe it tastes really bad! ;-)

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha oops.  I need to go back and correct that spelling error.  As for hints about Harry's attack, I'm pretty sure I dropped that same bit of info when Harry was having his nightmare.

     

    Thanks for the review :)

Title: Chapter 13 10 Sep 2007 6:46 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved this chapter! I actually didn't catch the plot hole, but I'm glad you added this chapter, because it was really lovely. At this point, is Snape aware of Vernon's abuse towards Harry? He didn't seem surprised, and I couldn't remember if Harry had told him or not. Anyway, excellent chapter. I really enjoyed it :)

    Author's Response:

    Yep, Snape is definitely aware.  He discovers the abuse at the very end of Chapter 1.

    I'm actually pretty glad for this chapter, too :)

Title: Chapter 13 10 Sep 2007 4:45 pm
Reviewer: Azuredragon (Signed) [Report This]
    I could have sworn blind that I reviewd this chapter earlier. . . but it's nowwhere to be seen O_o

    Ah well. I'll just have to leave another 1. That's all there is to it!

    Tee hee. Sevy's getting more and more parental! *grins* He'll make a great daddy. Don't give up little Harry!! Bond with the 'big scary' Potions Master! ^v^
    I was wondering how Harry was supposed to 'say' the pasword. Didn't come up with an answer either. . . sure glad you did. Lol Xx

    Author's Response: Anyone who comes back to re-review automatically is awesome. Thank you. Anyway, Harry doesn’t quite realize what he’s doing, but he certainly is persistent in his efforts to get Snape to care about him. Yeah, the question of the password woke me up in the middle of the night after I had posted. Hence, this chapter.
Title: Chapter 13 10 Sep 2007 1:45 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "But it was still ‘please’, and Harry still secretly thought of it as ‘the magic word’. Which was funny now that he knew so many real ones. But this had been the first, and he was powerless against it. And so he wrote."

    GAH THAT BIT IS SO CUTE. And completely perfect XD

    And on to more important things: SNAPEY YOU ARE MELTING! You are like a continental shift - you start off as an island and then BAM you're part of the continent. Get used to it, Snapey - I have this feeling that you'll be part of the continent the rest of your life XD

    Author's Response: XD.  I’m trying to make him melt slowly, but with Harry being so damned cute he’s having a hard time resisting.  And I’m secretly pleased (heh) with the way the ‘please’ sections worked out.  So I’m really glad you like that one.
Title: Chapter 12 10 Sep 2007 1:40 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "He mourned his lost mental faculties, but did not slow his pace."

    LOL SNAPEY YOU ARE FUNNY. And quaint. But mostly funny XD

    Plus Ron is made of something more awesome than awesome, and Harry is just so gawd dammned cute!

    I honestly like the whole Snape's-password-is-really-an-anagram-for-LILY-EVANS! and the fact that he's trying to be all like, I seriously don't care all that much about you, I just want to make sure you're warm so you don't eff up any more potions. Lol. LIAR XD

    Author's Response: It is rather a lame excuse.  And he hasn’t even got one for giving Harry his password.  And hey!  You’re the only one who reviewed here at P&S who got the anagram thing (okay, I added on extra “e”, but really that’s pretty forgivable, right?).  Kudos!!
Title: Chapter 11 10 Sep 2007 1:29 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    “Sooooo,” Ron finally drew out, “I guess we’ll have to start on researching Flammel another day."

    So firstly many LOLs for Ron, who is awesome.

    And secondly OMG SNAPEY NO NO NO. I think we need to have a chat about your interpersonal skills ie the fact that YOU HAVE NONE. No no no, Snapey, not good D:

    It would be total karma if Harry suddenly came down with the same rare, untreatable illness ... except of course by this time Snapey will be so attached to him that he will go to the ends of the earth to find a treatment ...

    LOL a fangirl can always dream XD

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha, I’m not predicting any illness for Harry.  He’s got enough to deal with right now.

    And Ron, yeah.  He’ll do anything to get out of work, lol.

     As for Snape, 1 grouchy teacher + 1 over-sensitive student = Chapter 11

Title: Chapter 10 10 Sep 2007 1:23 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    OUCH. SNAPEY YOU PWN MCGONAGALL XD

    Plus I don't want to shout (which incidentally is impossible over the internet but let's suspend our disbelief for a second) but I was totally like I KNEW IT BIATCH when Snape was like, oh yeeah, I DID visit the Dursleys, didn't I ... XD

    SNAPEY - you can't hide anything from us XD

    Author's Response: Oops, did he forget to mention that little detail?  Well, that’s Snape for you.  He doesn’t do these things for attention, he does them for justice – something he has a strong sense of.  It’s just too bad there’s Wizarding Law Enforcement, because I would have had him do much worse things to Dursley.
Title: Chapter 9 10 Sep 2007 1:17 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Maybe Snape feeds bad potions students to it."

    LOLOLOLOLOL. This entire chapter is full of 'lolololols', btw. Like that other line that I found, which is so perfect I'm going to add it to my growing list of Snape-isms:

    "I suppose that would depend on what colour absolute foolishness is."

    LYRA YOU ARE FUNNEH XD And made of awesomeness C:

    Author's Response: Aw, I love it when people think I’m funny. I’m not actually trying to be, it just works out that way. And you are made of awesomeness too, for reviewing every chapter! WOW.
Title: Chapter 8 10 Sep 2007 1:12 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "But when that face looked up at him, overwhelmed and basking in one statement of praise from a man the boy wasn't even supposed to like, he was unmanned."

    Ok, I am going to repeat my favourite phrase (and apologise profusely in advance, because this is going to crop up a lot in my reviews) OMG SNAPE/HARRY LUFF. First stop - feeling emotions (wink wink nudge nudge SNAPEY) next stop WORLD PEACE!!

    ... Wait. That doesn't quite fit XD

    It's still an excellent story, and Sweartoad is still very happy (though she is not quite sure why she is suddenly referring to herself in the third person. It must be one of life's mysteries XD)

    Author's Response:

    The best kinds of people refer to themselves in the third person I think. J  And oh yes, that’s one of my favourite bits, too.

    Snape and Harry for world peace, huh? Maybe we should send some potionsandsnitches stories over to the middle east?


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