Excellent start. I liked Snape knowing what to do while everyone else was pretty much useless.
Poor Harry, though. I wonder what really happened to him.
Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's not having too easy a time of it in this story. Thanks ùagain for reviewing.
It's interesting to see the canon story make an appearance here. Harry sure has captured Snape's heart in a hurry. I think McGonagall needs to be very afraid.
Author's Response: Well, he won't *hurt* her, although I think he'll have a few choice words. And yes, Harry has certainly captured his attention, if not his heart.
*sigh* I love this story. The relationship between Snape and Harry that you've created is sweet, but not TOO sweet, if that makes sense... I wish the chapters were longer... :( Hahaha. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Heh, well you can have longer chapters with a longer wait for updates, or shorter chapters and quicker updates? Actually, the chapters are just short because that's how they flow, thematically. Thanks for the review!
I really love this story and the different angles that you have thrown into it. Good stuff! I love your Snape...and who exactly is Luka??? And when is Harry going to find out about the Stone?? Is he?? Good stuff, love it! Your writing is amazing. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. The mystery of Luka will be solved. Eventually ;) As well as your questions about the stone!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 15 Jul 2007 9:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous)
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This is pretty good. Snape and Harry are interesting, and it's well written. I have to take issue with Hermione, though. Early Hermione wasn't soft and sensitive, she was loud and obnoxious :). Also, the sign language thing doesn't make much sense. I would think that his teachers would be able to come up with something, like a charmed parchment that would show what he wanted to say, or whatever.
Author's Response: I don't know, I think Hermione's a pretty good balance between sincere and obnoxious (or at least know-it-all). Yeah the signing thing is contrived, but it becomes important later on.
awww .... it's so cute. I love when Severus tries to be so stern and serious with Harry. I'm glad that Sev figured out what was going on, and agreed to let Harry stay with him in his quarters a few nights a week. Looking forward to a possible Sev reaming out McGonagall ?? Keep up the great work, and update soon. LES
Author's Response: Heh, I like when people start reviews with Awww. It means I've done my job! Thanks for reviewing :)
awww .... it's so cute. I love when Severus tries to be so stern and serious with Harry. I'm glad that Sev figured out what was going on, and agreed to let Harry stay with him in his quarters a few nights a week. Looking forward to a possible Sev reaming out McGonagall ?? Keep up the great work, and update soon. LES
Author's Response: Heh, I try to make it cute without being too overbearing. Glad it's working. Thanks for the review.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 15 Jul 2007 8:29 pm
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Awesome story!!! Hope you can update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
yay update! i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Coming right up!
This is really a good story! It's original, and I love how Snape is taking care of Harry, even if he tries to tell himself he doesn't really want to do it.
Author's Response: Hee, yes, Snape is a wee bit reluctant, but that doesn't seem to stop him, does it? Thanks for the review!
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