Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Reading the Signs
Title: Chapter 11 08 Jan 2011 8:02 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow that was amazing
Title: Chapter 10 08 Jan 2011 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    nice job Snape McGonagall was defintly just put in her place because if Ron was willing ot speak up and say that HArry was requesting Sanpe it says something
Title: Chapter 25 24 Jan 2010 2:21 am
Reviewer: Quenderra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Bravo! I love how you wrote this piece and found it to be quite plausible. Though, Rowling's original Harry is, indeed, rather well-adjusted despite his growing up life, I believe your depiction of Harry is very valid. Besides, AU is for taking liberties, is it not?

    Beautifully written - 9 stars (but only because that tense change several chapters back really threw me for a bit. >.-)
Title: Chapter 25 15 Dec 2009 5:45 pm
Reviewer: Lumiere (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant!
Title: Chapter 2 17 Nov 2009 5:34 pm
Reviewer: History (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that u jump right into your story but it took me a while to get a brood idea of Harry's age. other wise I am in love so far with your amazing story
Title: Chapter 2 17 Nov 2009 5:33 pm
Reviewer: History (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that u jump right into your story but it took me a while to get a brood idea of Harry's age. other wise I am in love so far with your amazing story
Title: Chapter 25 06 Nov 2009 3:33 am
Reviewer: Helga1967 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Beautiful! Excellent tale of the road of the search of love.
Title: Chapter 25 23 Oct 2009 6:10 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It is a very beautiful story. I am not sure if I have already left a review or not, but I was reading it again and felt how wonderful it was. So wanted to give a cheers once again!
Title: Chapter 25 31 Jul 2009 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it.
Title: Chapter 10 23 Jul 2009 8:49 pm
Reviewer: supergreak (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Um, I love your story so far. You've captured the characters well. But...
    "2 or 3 nights a week"
    First off, you use the same phrase at least three times. Substitute "a few nights" "a couple" "several" etc. Additionally, NEVER EVER use numerals in literature. Spell it out. It's not that hard.

    Author's Response:

    "Additionally, NEVER EVER use numerals in literature. Spell it out. It's not that hard."

    I wasn't going to respond to this at first, as I'm not sure there's a need to use that tone.  However...

    If you read the rest of the story, you can see that the majority of the time I follow that rule.  This was just a simple slip up on my part, not because "it's that hard". There was no need to be so condescending about it.

    As for the others, duly noted on the repetition, I'll watch out for that in the future, and thanks for the feedback on the characterization.


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