Aww...
"...Your smile's in your heart..."
I think I shall cry.
Oh yeah, and I also love your reference to Charlie Weasley and his dragons. ;-)
Aww! I love the once-reluctant-daddy. The little bath and bed time ritual is adorable, along with the hair coming.
This made me laugh out loud:
"...he was more than a handful, he was a bloody vocation." Haha!
Of course, the food hoarding is really sad. I hope Harry will feel safer soon.
Ooh, Lucius Malfoy is a slimy one. Grr. But good for Snape on bringing up Draco!
I loved the scene of Harry rushing back up the path. That's a beautiful image right there. ;-)
That is so sad... poor Severus. And poor Harry, too, even if he doesn't quite understand yet. I felt so bad for both of them when Snape was trying to explain the last 4-5 years to him.
Though this part did make me laugh:
"Oh to be a Death Eater again, for just five minutes..."
It's kinda sad, but it still made me giggle. ;-)
Aww, how sweet! This is really good. The only "complaint" I have at all is that I would strongly suggest you do a bit a more in the beginning to emphasize that Snape is *not* already a Professor at Hogwarts.
But besides that, I am thoroughly enjoying this. ;-)
That was sweet. I love that Merlin doll and was very happy to see Severus soften up.
Oh, that was precious. Snape's gotta give in. I know he will. ;-)
Aww, I liked this chapter. Though I am a bit confused a to whether or not Snape is supposed to be teaching at the school or not. But I guess that'll be cleared up later.
As sad as the line is, I really liked it when Snape said "I don't care about Harry,". Something about how he used the boy's first name, rather than his last name to emphasize his lack of concern. Almost as if he is trying to convince himself of that.
I love how Dumbledore can still make Severus feel like a student. I suppose because it shows that he is not totally shut off. Someone, even if it's Dumbledore, can still reach him.
Hmm, well this has the potential to be interesting. I've heard a lot of good things about this story, so I think I'll keep going. ;-)
| Title: Epilogue
| 15 Oct 2008 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: Livi (Anonymous)
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Aaaw, Strudelcheeks, this is just the nicest ending I've read in a good while. And let me tell you, I've had to work to find stuff to critique. Your story warms the cockles of my little heart.
Au revoir!
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