What a cliffhanger! I thought your depiction of Severus' rage/grief/pain was very in character and well described. The idea of the aspidis is facinating
Poor Harry! Poor Severus! Really interesting plot twist: I'm intregued as to where you're going with this ^^
Wonderful chapter, beautifully written; I thought that the coloured fogs were very interesting and I loved the way in which you portrayed Dumbledore's thoughts about Severus.
Very interesting; I really love your use of dreams.
Great chapter; I loved your portrayal of Remus's inner struggle and Hermione's dream was facinating; was is psychological or is the girl who considers divination a load of twaddle a seer lol!
| Title: 14: The Boy-Who-Lived No More
| 02 Aug 2010 12:45 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I feel kind of bad for Severus. It must be so overwhelming that now he has a son, and Voldie wants him.
I love the way you describe the house. I wish I had a house like that.
Another great chapter; I loved Severus' theories on the 'Light' and 'Dark'.
Very interesting and actually quite believable premise. I like your portrayal of James and I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going with this.
| Title: 2: Summer’s Ticking Time
| 01 Aug 2010 10:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Great chapter. Very interested about the hints of Harry's increased indurance, not to mention the book. Hope Hedwig is alright but, as her survival as long as she did in the canon seemed almost miraculous, I wonder if it'd be wise to hold out too much hope.
Very interesting chapter; I really liked how you kept the reader in suspense as to who the 'tall man' was and the interactions/dialogue were very realistic and in character.
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