"he could feel magic all around him, holding him up, supporting muscles that on their own, were little better than puddles of tired silk. "
Such brilliant imagery!
Oh, touché, Monsieur Snape!
| Title: Long After Midnight
| 02 Jul 2014 6:02 pm
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Smileworthy to the maximum degree. * sniff *
| Title: Expecto Patronum
| 01 Jul 2014 6:16 am
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"To visualize the flash of fire from his wand, to feel the sizzle deep inside him rising to the surface of his skin and then beyond, to make the spell come out. "
Limiting comments to your sublime writing skills. That description of Harry's experience of magic males me *believe*!
"she cares for you too" - Too. Too! **sob!**
| Title: Heart To Heart
| 30 Jun 2014 6:57 am
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Well, okay. I just have to say how utterly heartwarming that was. :)
| Title: Miss Granger May Be Right
| 29 Jun 2014 10:04 pm
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I think it may be best for me not to comment here further. Everything I want to say is so spoilery.
"realizing he wasn't a boy, he was just a scar and a prophecy."
Oh, the pathos. Such beautiful pathos.
Snape being nice to Harry for the first time, ever.
*sniff*
"realizing he wasn't a boy, he was just a scar and a prophecy."
Oh, the pathos. Such beautiful pathos.
Snape being nice to Harry for the first time, ever.
*sniff*
"he'd been gasping for an image of them... Remus had given him that image, and more. Remus had been there for him, had tutored him, had cared."
This serves to remind me that in canon, Remus made such a huge mistake, staying away from Harry. So sad
I laughed at this, though:
"How could the man look like his robes were billowing when he wasn't wearing any? When, in fact, he was wearing the quaint, slightly old-fashioned suits Remus tended to favour?"
| Title: Plans and Plots
| 29 Jun 2014 7:29 am
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"Harry froze, realizing that he really should have thought of that, sooner."
Oops...
This is just not Harry's day.
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