Oh my days. This story is by far one of the best I've ever read! I started this the other day and have been neglecting all my uni work just to read this! I absolutely love the whole plot, character development as well as the relationships formed!
Definitely going to read the sequel now! Well done to you and Mercredi on an excellent job!
Very very good story. I liked it.
you're story has managed to suck me in. i'm now hooked. i love the way you've managed this. great job!
Wonderfully written! It took days to finish but worth every moment. I hope you know in one of the chapeters where they are drink coco you have Draco drinking from an empty cup... Just can't seem to get it out of my mind so thought I'd share, I like the needle fiasco, it was subtle with just enough presence, not over powering. (I usually find stories become overly depressing when self harm enters) really great story and I swear I have not one complaint about your chapters being too short :P
This is my favorite series. Well-written and compelling, I've really never seen anything else like it in the HP fanfic world. I can't wait for the next installment of the AFLNO series!
this was truly one of the best stories i've ever read and i have to say that i enjoyed the entire journey I've felt not only Harry's happiness and sorrows but that of Draco's, Snape's and even some of the other characters the chapters really were extremely long but i've absolutely enjoyed going through each and every one of them u've created a fantastic world through these very interesting events and characters and i really really wish that this was what had really happened in the original series i'm really disappointed that this marvelous story ended and im just as excited that there are more! im so glad that u've thoroughly entertained us with ur very well formed creative writing skills please keep on writing im very pleased that i found such a heart warmimg adventurous story!
| Title: True Colours
| 03 Aug 2011 3:01 am
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| Reviewer: Pottergirl2009 (Anonymous)
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Hey the story was good (it still is) but why 96 chapters you should leave us hanging after Draco tucked the wand that would want us to read the rest of your stories (I still do).
| Title: The Expulsion Hearing
| 01 Aug 2011 4:49 am
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| Reviewer: Pottergirl2009 (Anonymous)
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This is a really good story and all but why do you have so much cursing I think that Ron's "Bloody Hell" is snot but why ad more?
| Title: A Lack of Confidence
| 29 Jul 2011 1:03 am
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| Reviewer: Pottergirl2009 (Anonymous)
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I love this it is the perfect story so far exept for chapter 25 and 26 those where a little gross and disturbing but other than that it is a fantastic story and have herd very few better than this but it is sad that dumbledor and Harry don't have a very good relation ship
WOW, wonder what'll happen next? Looking forward to it :) Your a great writor, keep the good woke up!.
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