Great chapter, your description of Petunia was really poignant and touching and I really liked Harry's little bit of 'revenge' against Snape
Great chapter, very interesting about the black energy; I love the way you're portraying Snape- as you said, the man is all about details. Harry's conversation about clothes was very poignant and I like the little details you included, like Marks and Spenser
Ooops, perhaps asking for another test from Severus was a bad idea lol! Great chapter, loved the interaction between the characters
Great chapter; Snape's very in character and I love his interaction with Harry. The final paragraph about Draco is very interesting
Beautifully written; I love how you've layered events to lead up to the very worst way Harry's letter could be read (though I expect Snape will be sorry for it by the time the letter's through). I love how you've portrayed the characters and Hermione's correct prediction was very funny.
Great chapter; I love Harry's procrastination over reading the letter- you've portrayed his thought process really beautifully and realistically- and the mystery of the Dursleys using an owl is a very good tension inducing device. I love how you've depicted the characters and their interaction.
I know what happens next chapter.
And it's killing me!
I know what happens next chapter.
And it's killing me!
| Title: A Letter From Surrey
| 01 Mar 2011 5:52 am
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| Reviewer: Imai (Signed)
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I just randomly thought of this story because I read it before and wanted to read it again! And I found it!
Author's Response: I don't know how long ago you read it, so maybe you know this already -- but NOW, there is one complete sequel and a second sequel WIP!
Aspen
You have no idea how much I LOVE this chapter. Damn, it's just too awesome, the delirous Harry, and the Bemused Snape.
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