awwww Harry and Remus' insights on the dreams so make sense a lot of sense
you write him well
well said thanks from Harry Snape is the only adult who treats him like he isn't some sort of celeberty and you show that in this as well
| Title: Miss Granger May Be Right
| 09 Jan 2011 8:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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For Sape to actually admit that Hermione may be right says a lot about his worry
awww Snape seriously
you write him well
| Title: Epilogue: Severus
| 02 Jan 2011 11:36 am
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| Reviewer: Xedra (Anonymous)
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I simply don't know what to say. I've literally used every bit of my spare time over the past several days (including breaks at work) to read this. It's been hailed as a masterpiece by others and I can only agree, though I'd say that's an understatement. This fic made me luagh out loud and truly, truly touched my heart. I'm so so so glad there's a sequel!
| Title: Remus
| 02 Dec 2010 7:25 am
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| Reviewer: Snape Fan (Anonymous)
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I love this! :D it's amazing, and well written! :D you captured the characters emotions and feeling very well :D
I don't do LiveJournal, or I'd "floo" you there. To answer the question raised earlier about where Harry offers to charm off the Dark Mark but Severus points out that could lose him his arm (!), it's in this chapter of AYLNO, #85-The Dark Mark Returns, last section. It's where the following dialog occurs: "Charms, Harry thought, something catching at his consciousness. Charms . . . charmed potions . . .
"Dad," he said when he'd chased that thought through to the end. "I was just thinking . . . what if I brewed some kind of charmed healing potion, and used a wanded charm to make it really powerful, and we tried using that on your wound after we cut the mark away? It might heal you up well enough that you don't have to go through this again."
Snape growled slightly. "It might also seek perfection to the point of banishing my arm into oblivion, you idiot child."
Thank you so much for a very enjoyable weeks reading. This has been my holiday 'book' and I loved every minute. The inclusion of psychology and the focus on the impact of trauma was very well done and not overdone either. One of my biggest frustrations with DH was that is ended so abrubtly with no focus on the recovery after such a traumatic event. I also really liked your portrayal of Draco and Harry. Draco is a very well rounded character and not 'reformed' overnight and I was very touched by Harry's vulreability in this. You have inspired me to get going with my own stories again. I look forward to reading the next part of this tale. Kendra.
Thank you so much for a very enjoyable weeks reading. This has been my holiday 'book' and I loved every minute. The inclusion of psychology and the focus on the impact of trauma was very well done and not overdone either. One of my biggest frustrations with DH was that is ended so abrubtly with no focus on the recovery after such a traumatic event. I also really liked your portrayal of Draco and Harry. Draco is a very well rounded character and not 'reformed' overnight and I was very touched by Harry's vulreability in this. You have inspired me to get going with my own stories again. I look forward to reading the next part of this tale. Kendra.
I can't remember which time this is that I've reread this chapter of AYLNO, but I can tell you this: I think the title "My Broom Can Zoom" is absolutely inspired! Might I suggest that one of these years, once you've finished the last third of your trilogy, you & Mercredi devote yourselves to doing "My Broom Can Zoom"? After all, Rowling herself did "Quidditch Through The Ages" and "Tales of Beedle the Bard". I think after all the heavy duty angst, plotting, and the like which your "LNO" books embody, it would be a delightful diversion for you to write "My Broom Can Zoom"!
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