Yay the motorbike! I loved the fact that it was all shiny. Wonderful touch and very visual.
I'm glad that Harry's friends still count on him, even though they were feeling down at first.
nice! please continue, I like it
| Title: Flight
| 10 Mar 2007 4:51 pm
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| Reviewer: LindseySnape (Anonymous)
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Great first chapter, this has the makings to be an awesome story. I love the way Severus is so helpful, but oh so still himself. Keep up the great work and update soon.
Fantastic. Poor Harry. I liked the clock as the introduction to Harry, and I liked that Harry was sitting there, watching the Death Eater. That shows that he's capable. I also loved that he was hurt, I love h/c! Poor kid though, he had a lot of injuries.
Vernon and Co. arriving seemed to happen a little too neatly, and when Harry was looking at the "Wizard" I got a little lost and kept thinking that he was looking at Snape, or that Snape was looking at Harry with that description. it was a little confusing. The nurse fighting with Snape was hilarious. I love that Harry's running on his own. I can't wait to see Snape run after him!
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