| Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic
| 16 Jun 2008 7:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Lily (Anonymous)
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Awww, Harry's so sweet. Sweet but a little bit silly. Snape will totally cream him and then tell him, "by the way son, I knew you didnt do it all along" while Harry is crying and nursing a very sore behind.
At least that's what I think will happen.
Poor kid.
I like the comedy bit about the basket getting too light and almost floating away as well as the part about Harry admitting to Draco that he thought he would have a girlfriend first. But I am a little confused there because isnt he counting Cho?
Update soon!
Lovely twist! Glad to see another chapter.
eek!!! so many ways to go from that point!!! update soon, please please please!!!!!
Oh, what a place to leave off! I am loving the story and cannot wait for more. Keep up the great work.
| Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic
| 16 Jun 2008 5:58 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh!! Haha!! Harry is so dead! But he's not even a good liar! He's going to get caught on this, I just know it. Sigh. I love Worty, he's so cute! I want more of this story!!! Thanks so much for the updates!! Poor Harry. I wonder how snape will take this. I'm sure Worty will get caught out eventually. Please update when you can!!
| Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic
| 16 Jun 2008 5:47 am
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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Ron and Hermione going out that's cool but what is not cool is them sneaking around and not telling Harry - why hide it. Worty may start thinking of Harry like a big brother who you can run to when you are in trouble and who will get you out of trouble. I think it’s great but the trouble that Worty is in right now, Harry taking the blame Worty just doesn’t just owe him one he owes him a life debt as Snape is going to kill him (this debt may come in handy later). If Worty was in Gryffindor I would say he would confess at the last moment, but he is in Slytherin so I think Harry is not going to make dinner at least he would be standing for dinner.
Oh very brave (and totally stupid) of Harry. I doubt if Severus will believe it, but it could be fun to watch.
Ron needs to keep his mouth shut about spankings
| Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic
| 16 Jun 2008 3:29 am
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| Reviewer: ER (Anonymous)
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Did Snape see Worty in his office? I'm thinking Snape will let Harry take the blame, but knows Worty really did it. Thanks for the update.
| Title: Chapter 12 - A DA Meeting
| 06 Jun 2008 8:15 am
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| Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous)
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Great job, so far, I read the last one and absolutely loved it!
I can't wait till you update, so I request you do it soon!!!!
(or else...)
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| Title: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons
| 29 May 2008 11:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous)
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I was just wondering why you feel Harry ought to be spanked so much? I mean it seems like a constant theme throughout most of your writting, i an just curious to know why?
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