| Title: Chapter 10 - Guilty
| 16 Apr 2008 9:18 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Scary last line!!!
Great chapter!! I feel sorry for Harry's haircut. Maybe he can drink a potion to make his hair grow?
| Title: Chapter 9 - Faking
| 16 Apr 2008 9:10 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow, awesome chapter!! I was so amused by all the teacher's reactions to Harry's illness, and even Ron's. They wouldn't let him get a word in edgewise!! LOL! That was great. And poor Snape.
The training plans sound awesome. I can't wait to read them!
Ahh, Draco!
I like "the other Snape" :)
| Title: Chapter 10 - Guilty
| 16 Mar 2008 5:14 am
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| Reviewer: Tracy (Signed)
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Harry certainly finds himself full of conflicting loyalties. At least he was willing to admit that Draco had every right to react the way he did when he found out what Harry had told Ron.
The haircut bit was too damn funny!
Another great chapter hon!
Tracy
| Title: Chapter 9 - Faking
| 16 Mar 2008 5:01 am
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Yeah, the site is back up and I can leave feedback! I hate to say it, but if I'd been Harry, I might have done the exact same thing in order to avoid going with that woman and getting into trouble again. However, if I'd been Snape, I'd probably have flipped out too once I'd learned it had all been an act! LOL! I can easily see both of their POV's!
Great chapter hon!
Tracy
Good chapter. I liked the part where Harry calls he's hair bad. My nephew does it all the time
| Title: Chapter 10 - Guilty
| 07 Mar 2008 5:15 pm
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| Reviewer: lily (Anonymous)
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This was a great chapter. I love the haircut bit. Harry is so adorable. The part with Malfoy was realistic because he would be mortified to know that Ron of all people knew that Snape spanked him. I also like the part with Ron wanting to hear more because Draco has been really mean to him in the past. Hermione was torn because she cares about Ron but she doesnt want to be cruel.
I like how Harry was scared that they would ask about his own punishments and that he enjoyed Snape saying "At this rate people will think you're Lupin's son, instead of mine." And then the "Bad hair. Bad bad hair" bit was hilarious!
Update again soon plz!
I love your story.
I am so incrediably happy you updated this story! You did a really good job making the characters sound cannon, and you added both humor and some seriousness. Ron made me laugh when he was going on about Draco's punnishement, I felt like Harry's reaction. Draco does diserve some embarrassment because he is so bloody awful to the Weasleys, but I have to admit that it was bad of Harry to tell them of his punnishments. I had to laugh when Harry was chased, poor bloke was in deep trouble. Severus's comments made me smirk in amusement. This new training room sounds interesting, cant wait untill they try it out. Wonderful work with this story, you've gone a really great job so far. PLEASE post again soon!
Ha! Nice touch with the 5-year-old's haircut!
nice chapter, harry deserved to be punched by draco and can't wait to find more about the training room and the d.a
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